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My first Flip-Book



This is my very first flipbook.

Only 84 frames. I loved making this! n_n
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Your basic drawings are good and stay pretty close to one another. Everything stays roughly the same size and proportion even when it moves, as it should. The frame rate is a little low, but I do that on purpose sometimes myself :blush: The fall off the cliff needs a little work with the timing. Think about your pendulum, you have more frames at the top of the pendulum because it is moving slower there. This is like half a pendulum, when he first jumps he'd be moving slower so there'd be more frames bunched together, and at the end of his fall he'd be going faster so there's be fewer frames. Right now it's even spaced and doesn't quite work right. I like him swoosh around as a little blob, that's amusing :3