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thank you for the llama
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Hey Lapras can i  ask you to Look over my comic Series The Tale of Jack Luna
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laprasking|Hobbyist Filmographer
Not too bad, but there are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I know I should talk, I suck at proof reading my own stuff, but even I spotted mistakes in the dialogue.  

My advise would be to look for an online spelling and grammar checker to type your dialogue in before c+p-ing it into the comic. 
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Can yoy tell me Where the Spelling mistakes are so I can fix them?
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lapraskingEdited |Hobbyist Filmographer
I'll be honest, there are quite a few and you probably don't want every page flooded with comments pointing out the mistakes you made, it just looks bad if you want to attract many folks to your works, that you misspell and rely on people to point these mistakes out. Those things will put people off from watching/subscribing to your future works. 

I would say just type everything into an online spelling and grammar checker and it will do the job for you plus save you and me time. As I mentioned, I'm not a great proof reader myself, you don't want me to miss or overlook anything. 
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I'm open for story commissions 
would you like one
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laprasking|Hobbyist Filmographer
My funds are going towards a D.I.Y Project this month but thanks for the offer. 
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