Beastly Confessions REMAKE Page 5

I think on this page you've got the right balance between the exposition and the eye candy, and if there's a lot of text, each panel also has plenty of action and plenty to look at, whether it's the impressive top-down view of Hank in the first panel, the reveal of Hank's tower in panel two if you're not distracted by his soles, a nice view of the tops of his feet in panel three, or his torso and expression in panel four and of course his surprise and horror in the final panel as he's stripped off his dignity and his pants. The action tells its own story, so if you're here for the eye candy you get a nice action sequence and fan service. The text itself, does a good job of introducing Dr Yang, showing the contrast between her professionalism and that of Gyrich and building the background without just being exposition. If Hank's not doing much talking at this point, still he gets a good remark in at the end.

Artwise, in black and white I expect it's not easy pulling off a one-way mirror particularly shown from both sides but it's not looking bad here, you can make out the details easily enough for instance with Ms Yangs bodysuit and Gyrich's tie and I imagine this is your first time trying something with this in any case. As mentioned, plenty of action with Hank and plenty of eye candy, musculature and fur texture looking good in every panel and very nice expressions in panel four and five. It had already been interesting, building up with each page getting to the moment of release. peril increasing particularly with the fuzzy roller and once the trunks come off...boom.