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Fallen

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Fallen

I slept as I fell
into your eyes
into the depths of your eyes
into the sea
the warmth of the sea

dreaming
floating suspended
immersed in the sea
breathing the sea

calm
breathing rhythm
breathing together
enwrapped in your arms

folded together
flowing together
woven together
in dreams of the sea

breathing together
the afternoon sunlight
breathing your slow rhythm
in afternoon sunlight

I have fallen
fallen into your eyes
you will hold me
for ever
I've been working on this for twenty years, and I'm still not satisfied with it. But it was too long ago now to do any more with it I'm afraid.

It's a waltz, at about three syllables per second.
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VaguelyUnaware's avatar
Well I have noticed alot of people are never truly satisfied witrh their work but I love this. I think its beautiful. I can relate to this actually. Its truly amazing...and twenty years is along time to have worked on something.