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Ash redfern graphic fanfic 2 by lallychan Ash redfern graphic fanfic 2 by lallychan
Here's a page of my fanfic's second chapter. It's inspired from L.J.Smith's "Night World". If you are interested in reading it (free of course) you can visit my web site:
[link]
section "gallery"-"amatorial comix"
if there are problems here the direct link of chapter 1:
[link]
and chapter 2:
[link]
please leave a comment here! ;)
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cat-lady-vica Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student
where did u find this graphic night world?? I want to read it tooo
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MrSpectical Featured By Owner May 13, 2010
when is chapter three going to be up i want to see more Mary and ash!
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naruhina88 Featured By Owner May 3, 2009  Student Digital Artist
cool let me know when you post chapter 3
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lallychan Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
sure! ;)
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naruhina88 Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thx!
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naruhina88 Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Student Digital Artist
umm the chapter 2 wont work
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naruhina88 Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Student Digital Artist
um first page ummmm and your website dosen't work it comes up 'enter this site' click...blank
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lallychan Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
Maybe you don't have the flash plug in, anyway try again the link of the second chapter, it should work now. But I have to check the grammar better, so if you find mistakes be patience and if you want to, let me know with a note ;)
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PillyChan Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
è bello!!
mi piace l'effetto dell'ombra della mano!
in fondo,conoscendoti,ti viene tutto bene!!
complimenti!
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mortal-vampire-host Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
wow. this is good! but your grammar is TERRIBLE! I dont wanna be mean, but god, its almost incomprehendible. sorry, really. My grammar isn't perfect either. Im sure you can find tones of mistakes in this message. but ya, Your fan fic would be twenty million times better if you just did a quick grammar check...sry again. I LOVED IT THOUGH! I <3 ASH! and the ENTIRE series! great job!
-Ali <3
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lallychan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
I know, I'm not very good in english :p
that's why I ask anyone to find mistakes, so I can correct them. I'm so sorry, that its incomprehendible. I'll try to check again anyway! thanks again!!! ;)))
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