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Ash redfern graphic fanfic 2
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Published: April 10, 2009
© 2009 - 2019 lallychan
Here's a page of my fanfic's second chapter. It's inspired from L.J.Smith's "Night World". If you are interested in reading it (free of course) you can visit my web site:
[link]
section "gallery"-"amatorial comix"
if there are problems here the direct link of chapter 1:
[link]
and chapter 2:
[link]
please leave a comment here! ;)
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cat-lady-vica's avatar
where did u find this graphic night world?? I want to read it tooo
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MrSpectical's avatar
when is chapter three going to be up i want to see more Mary and ash!
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naruhina88|Student Digital Artist
cool let me know when you post chapter 3
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naruhina88|Student Digital Artist
thx!
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naruhina88|Student Digital Artist
umm the chapter 2 wont work
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naruhina88|Student Digital Artist
um first page ummmm and your website dosen't work it comes up 'enter this site' click...blank
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lallychan's avatar
Maybe you don't have the flash plug in, anyway try again the link of the second chapter, it should work now. But I have to check the grammar better, so if you find mistakes be patience and if you want to, let me know with a note ;)
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PillyChan's avatar
è bello!!
mi piace l'effetto dell'ombra della mano!
in fondo,conoscendoti,ti viene tutto bene!!
complimenti!
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wow. this is good! but your grammar is TERRIBLE! I dont wanna be mean, but god, its almost incomprehendible. sorry, really. My grammar isn't perfect either. Im sure you can find tones of mistakes in this message. but ya, Your fan fic would be twenty million times better if you just did a quick grammar check...sry again. I LOVED IT THOUGH! I <3 ASH! and the ENTIRE series! great job!
-Ali <3
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lallychan's avatar
I know, I'm not very good in english :p
that's why I ask anyone to find mistakes, so I can correct them. I'm so sorry, that its incomprehendible. I'll try to check again anyway! thanks again!!! ;)))
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