Armada Starscream headshot

(Armada) ...I really really wanted something diff. for this but it didnt turn out the way I wanted...WTF and why I cant seem to get the anime-ish look, it always ends up looking ..like a ....half-fleshy..... ew..... ...Dont you just HATE it when you cant get the look you want? I was kinda aiming for the armada distorted anime look but.... yeah... ....I need cel shading tips from Dyemoochyyyyy