My Tattoo

This is partly a submission (cause I can ) and partly a request for those on my friends list that fancy having a go at designing a tattoo for me.

This is based on the Cheshire Cat from Alice In Wonderland. I was going for the famous semi-visible stage except using the eyes rather than the grin since they're more captivating, I think.

I will accept any criticism or general feedback on what I've got so far and would also appreciate any of other peoples' ideas since I'm not sure enough about this one to go and have it burned into my skin just yet I'm not the best sketcher in the world and so I'll consider any sort of variation on this really If someone could do something with the grin (which I really struggled with) or indeed any other interpretation of the character that would also be most cool

Thankyee for any replies. I'll also be posting this up in the forum too