No matter species, race or name
Whether fur or scales or skin
We all want to protect our kin
It matters not whether you talk
Or if you fly or climb or walk
We all share one important part
And that's the beating of a heart
Chains Of Reality
Pretty Blue Pills
You Made It All Better
Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconPoeticalCondidtion: with the critique you requested.
I think this poem is successful in every way. The brevity works nicely- you say a whole lot with just a few words! The rhyme and flow of the poem are spot on, which makes it easy to read and understand. A good read with a powerful message. I have no other constructive criticism to offer…
Thank you and have a great night.