Fallout Equestria THDC CHPT 4 P15

Hmm.  Just a few thoughts.  I like what you've done with Little Macintosh.  The only problem, as I see it, is that the scope looks like it might be a bit awkwardly placed.  If it's meant to be held in the mouth, the scope would be over the muzzle, instead of near the eye.

You might also consider using the same tech-ish script for the computer screens, instead of writing everything in.