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Macross Elysium (Chapter One-Prologue Page 1)

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My first fan comic set in the Macross universe with all original characters, Macross Elysium follows a former pilot for the UN Spacy as he struggles with getting over his troubled past. I fully intend to continue this series over time. I hope you enjoy.

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BloodyVocaloid's avatar

Okay! It's time for me to pull my weight and actually start commenting on some of your gorgeous comic pages! So let's get started!


First of all! Your spectacular chapter one cover art!

I thought this REALLY set the standards for your comic and pretty much sums up everything that's going to be in chapter one. Valkyries and pretty boys! What could go wrong?! Ahaha.

Oisin's expression is so spot on. I just- Ah! Wow! I wish I could draw expressions like you! His hair seems a little long, but judging from the way the scarf in his hand is flowing and Zhorein's ponytail, I get the sense that a wind is blowing?

Wow! You were able to convey that with a few well placed items in your drawing and it came out beautifully!

KYAAA! I LOVE how well you can draw flight suits in this!!! The wrinkles, the shading! BAH! And don't even get me STARTED on how well you draw mech! JELLY JELLY JELLY!

The perspective you have on Zhorein is just so flawless! You have no idea how much I wish I could draw a character from behind! And yet here you are doing it like it was second nature. And the fact you drew him with his hand in his pocket and it doesn't look like some deformed lump on his side! RRRH! Too perfect!

Seriously. My only critique to this is that there's not very much contrast between Zhorein's hair and the Valkyrie. Maybe outline Zhorein's hair with a white outline if something like that happens again?

Oh, and don't think I missed the fact that you used your great picture of your model blowing up for the background! It's faint but it's a VERY nice touch!

This whole cover had me super excited to read your comic! And it still does! Fantastic job!!!

CazzArcher's avatar
It looks interesting so far and the art is amazing:)
kylefalconkpd's avatar
Thanks! I'm glad you like what you see!
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