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BSD OC - William Shakespeare (Kuroyukihime) by kuroyukihime666 BSD OC - William Shakespeare (Kuroyukihime) by kuroyukihime666
To be... Or not to be...
This time I did my best.

General Information:

Name: William Shakespeare

Nickname: Kuroyukihime

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Birthday: 01.01

Weight: 20 pounds

Height: 149

Nationality: Japanese

Affiliation: port mafia, armed detective agency and guild (quadruple agent)

Occupation: guild vice-boss

Ability: wolf transformation, resurrection and time travel powers

 

Traits of voice:

Language: japanese but can speak 10 other languages

Style of speaking: vulgar but cute at the same timeme

Volume of voice: she can be very quiet or very loud

  

Biography:

Her parents died in an accident when she was a little girl. Luckily she survived, but she is scarred to this day... She grew up in an orphanage, but everyone here hated her because of her looks and strong abilities. She hated everyone, so one day she decided to kill them all. She transformed into her wolf form and devoured every kid that ever made fun of her. She ate their guts... When she finally transformed back into her human form and realized what she has done, she was crying for 4 days straight. She became homeless... when finally, Guild boss Francis Flitzgerald found her lying on the street and covered in blood. He adopted her. She became vice-boss of the Guild, and she was a popular pop star in America. Francis ordered her to come back to Japan and infiltrate Port Mafia and Armed Detective Agency, so she ended her career in America, and started her mission.
When she arrived back in Japan, the first guy that she saw was Dazai!!! It was a love from the first sight. She even said that she would commit suicide for him, but she has an important mission to accomplish... She foreshadowed her betrayal...
She passed her exam easily. She failed it the first time because she won't risk her life for a stupid random ass people, but she rewinded time and did it properly the second time. She got into ADA and everyone was really happy and they threw a big party for her. She kept talking with Francis over Skype and she told him every information about ADA needed!!!
Her second goal was to infiltrate the Port Mafia, so she asked Dazai if he could help her and he was like "OK no problem Kuro-chan!!". He arranged her meeting with Chuuya. When she met him she was like "OMG he hot but I must focus.. on my mission!!". She transformed into her wolf form and killed some policemen. Chuuya was like ok she can kill so she is good, she will be a fine mafia!!! And she so cute omg!!! But her final trial began. She had to shot Kyouka in her face because she betrayed Port Mafia and was hanging with Atshushi's weak ass.. Kuroyukihime assaulted her, and Kyouka went into a coma for 20 years. NOW THEY TRUST HER. SHE INFILTRATED PORT MAFIA SUCCESSFULLY!! now she is a quadruple agent, and her daddy Francis is very proud. "Yatta!!!" she shouted. " TO BE... OR NOT TO BE... THE BEST !!!"

Personality and other information:

Likes: guns and cute things

Dislikes: kyouka she eats shit!!

Love interest: dazai chuuya (love triangle ;////;)

Friends: everyone except kyouka

Enemies: kyouka she hates her very much, but that doesnt matter cuz kyouka is in coma

Rival: kyouka

Hobbies: hanging out with friends, cute things, sweets and cool clothes. she also likes being quadruple agent cuz its rly exciting

Family: her parents died in an accident ;-; so she grew up in an orphanage 

Ability and/or combat:

Ability name and reference: three abilities - Macbeth (foresight), Hamlet (time travel) and King Lear (resurrection)

Type of ability (combat, not combat): both combat and non combat

Special movement names (if the character has an ability): too many!!!

Special skills (like Ranpo’s deduction): wolf transformation (similar to Lovecraft's tentacle monster)

Ability description: u can guess u dumbo ; P

Weakness (physical and psychological): she has no weaknesses

Strength (physical and psychological): everything u can think of

 

Statistics:

Ability Power: 10/10

Speed (agility): /10

Perception: 10/10

Technique: 9/10

Intelligence: 10/10

Endurance: 8/10

Self-Strength: 10/10

Charisma: 10/10

Luck: 1/10 she is very unlucky ever since the accident happened... i guess it's God's punishment..

 

Character quote: To be or not to be...

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:iconaurora-dreamer:
Aurora-dreamer Featured By Owner May 29, 2018  Student Digital Artist
oh god why...why do you make stuff like this
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:icondesaturatedpurple:
DesaturatedPurple Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
This is the most glorious drawing I have ever seen.
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:icondesaturatedpurple:
DesaturatedPurple Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I just noticed you may be serious...
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:icondisperata2004:
Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018
And i think your OC is too Mary sue...
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:icondisperata2004:
Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018
Those are to much crazy details... I think you have to practice more your draw skills on paper first... then you can draw on wacom... and the most important thing is you have to think carefully about your OC's outfits and Oc's character...
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018
idk what do you mean. i can already draw on paper and in gimp.. what else is there to practice..
i think about my oc a lot!! :( i always give my best because i want her to be cute ;-; but everyone is hating on me ;-;
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:icondisperata2004:
Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018
You have to think about her NORMAL of her... you are making her to be a perfect human..
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2018
she is perfect. so what? perfect people exist too, for example Rihanna
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:icondisperata2004:
Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2018
But this OC have too much things don't exist in the world. You have to think carefully about the RULES in the anime. Like:
- 1 character just got only ONE ability.
- Or the character can be famous but it CAN'T be like THE BEST IN THE WORLD.
And something like: Why does her hair have too many colours?
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2018
her hair is colorful because she likes it like that wtf!! have u not heard about hair dyeing .?
she can be the best. william shakespeare is the besttt!!! romeo and juliet is amazing!!
she has more than one ability because she is special and the best what is so har d to understandxd
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:icondisperata2004:
Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2018
And why does her nickname is Kuroyukihime? And the nickname usually have the meaning of it. Example like :
Dazai and chuuya is Soukoku. Is mean the Double Black.
And Kuroyukihime? Is the Black Snow Princess. And you just relize. Why does the snow black?
About the picture you draw ,All people i show them, they said that's exactly like Kyouka ( So that's why because you hate Kyouka? Because you jealous about her? ). Your drawing is like you just trace the original picture (Ecxept the mouth) and colour the different colour. I have never trace any picture in the anime even i have a OC.
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kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2018
BLACK SNOW PRINCESS - she likes snow, black and she is a princess. btw soukoku doesnt make sense either. why are they called double black if they are both white?xd 
I HATE KYOUKA so i erased her from the existence and drew kuroyukihime on top of her lol. i hate kyouka because she killed 35 people, and thats DISGUSTING!!!
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Disperata2004 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2018
They call double black because in the past, they were in the dark ( is the Mafia ) and the " double " means they are perfect with eachother. Because they work together very good.
And killed 35 people? How about you? Your OC just killed every children in the orphanage. Like ALL children in the orphanage it's mean your OC just killed more than 100 children? That's more DISGUSTING!
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crimsoncake Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Best art 132-10
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018
thanks fam <3
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:iconcrimsoncake:
crimsoncake Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Super hot 😤👌🏻
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Student Digital Artist
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Student Digital Artist
On top of that your character...has no weakness? That's kinda impossible. And she can't possible have 10/10 in almost everything....it's kinda mary-sue ish
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DaChineseChicken Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018
oh my gosh you must be feeling so attacked rn Waaaah! 
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018  Student Digital Artist
not...really???
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:icondachinesechicken:
DaChineseChicken Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018
It OK I undertand. Not everybody can be as perfect as kuroyukihime! The Michael Rosen facepalm 

Praise be to the Lord, to our God our Savior who daily bears our burdens. Cute Jesus Blinkie Icon 
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Uh no
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:icondachinesechicken:
DaChineseChicken Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018
Deep down u understand... and its okayI Know That Feel Caterpie Emote 
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Sorry but no. Her character is a serious Mary sue and I don't really care for characters like a that nor people's who claim their characters are not such.
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:icondachinesechicken:
May God have mercy on your poor misguided soul! :0:o (Eek) 
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kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
she has one 1/10 stat so she's not a mary sue lul. she has no weaknesses because i can't think of any
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:iconmjrnj:
MJRNJ Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you didn't conjure up proper weaknesses before hand especially in character development this is a horrific character from the start the fact that most of the ability ratings are within the range of 10/10 and 8/10 with the exception of luck because under a majority of circumstances luck isn't the case. not to forget adding onto you bashing on MissCotter's art work yet your ripping off of what looks like an anime and you call her artwork horrid jfc you cant even be original I am one who has done character development without the use of art but for DND purposes and you may think why it is relevant well thats because even with drawing up OCs tbh this isnt original to add that there is so much cropping involved it looks like someone in a 1st grade class was pushed infront of a computer without any information and the fact you came down on other artists who actually take time to DRAW is pathetic even though this is a full hearted opinion from watching you act like a fool on social media so why dont you pick up whatever device you have and draw something with REAL character development and not try to whip up some sorry excuse of a anime girl comparable to jesus and weighs barely 20 pounds and a cliché background which has been so over used i could take each time somebody has used that and make a fucking bible out of it
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Student Digital Artist
...do you know what a mary sue is?
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kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
no -_- can u explain?everyone calls my oc mary sue but she is not her. her name is kuroyukihime for god's sake!! i dont understand
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MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Okay, the reason we are calling her a mary-sue is because she has mary-sue qualities and is almost very similar. 

This is basically a definition (from wiki)
Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment.[1] They can usually perform better at tasks than should be possible given the amount of training or experience.

Which your character happens to fall into.
She is seemingly perfect, with hardly any weaknesses or flaws. 

It's good you have a character you like but to make a proper character they need flaws and weaknesses. Think of her as if she is a real person and create her based on that. 
A character can be perfect but not too perfect.

You just have to make her as if she is a normal person, a normal regular girl. Her name is fine (although you should try to shorten it for the titles) 
But people will see her as a mary-sue because she is seemingly perfect and flawless
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Student Digital Artist
This isn't...bad but it's not great either. Can I ask what you use when you draw this? Like do you use a mouse or...?
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
i use wacom intuos pro m, I need a good tablet to handle my skill.
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:iconmisscotter:
MissCotter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Student Digital Artist
You actually just need a stabilizer...? 
The wacom tablets are very good tablets...it has nothing to do with it not being able to handle skill
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kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
pro artist needs a pro tablet. thats all
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Lebender-Geist Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The best hime is at it again! All praise the Kuroyukihime! 
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:iconkuroyukihime666:
kuroyukihime666 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
hell yeah, she's back!
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:iconlebender-geist:
Lebender-Geist Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And better than ever!
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