This time I did my best.
Name: William Shakespeare
Weight: 20 pounds
Affiliation: port mafia, armed detective agency and guild (quadruple agent)
Occupation: guild vice-boss
Ability: wolf transformation, resurrection and time travel powers
Traits of voice:
Language: japanese but can speak 10 other languages
Style of speaking: vulgar but cute at the same timeme
Volume of voice: she can be very quiet or very loud
Her parents died in an accident when she was a little girl. Luckily she survived, but she is scarred to this day... She grew up in an orphanage, but everyone here hated her because of her looks and strong abilities. She hated everyone, so one day she decided to kill them all. She transformed into her wolf form and devoured every kid that ever made fun of her. She ate their guts... When she finally transformed back into her human form and realized what she has done, she was crying for 4 days straight. She became homeless... when finally, Guild boss Francis Flitzgerald found her lying on the street and covered in blood. He adopted her. She became vice-boss of the Guild, and she was a popular pop star in America. Francis ordered her to come back to Japan and infiltrate Port Mafia and Armed Detective Agency, so she ended her career in America, and started her mission.
When she arrived back in Japan, the first guy that she saw was Dazai!!! It was a love from the first sight. She even said that she would commit suicide for him, but she has an important mission to accomplish... She foreshadowed her betrayal...
She passed her exam easily. She failed it the first time because she won't risk her life for a stupid random ass people, but she rewinded time and did it properly the second time. She got into ADA and everyone was really happy and they threw a big party for her. She kept talking with Francis over Skype and she told him every information about ADA needed!!!
Her second goal was to infiltrate the Port Mafia, so she asked Dazai if he could help her and he was like "OK no problem Kuro-chan!!". He arranged her meeting with Chuuya. When she met him she was like "OMG he hot but I must focus.. on my mission!!". She transformed into her wolf form and killed some policemen. Chuuya was like ok she can kill so she is good, she will be a fine mafia!!! And she so cute omg!!! But her final trial began. She had to shot Kyouka in her face because she betrayed Port Mafia and was hanging with Atshushi's weak ass.. Kuroyukihime assaulted her, and Kyouka went into a coma for 20 years. NOW THEY TRUST HER. SHE INFILTRATED PORT MAFIA SUCCESSFULLY!! now she is a quadruple agent, and her daddy Francis is very proud. "Yatta!!!" she shouted. " TO BE... OR NOT TO BE... THE BEST !!!"
Personality and other information:
Likes: guns and cute things
Dislikes: kyouka she eats shit!!
Love interest: dazai chuuya (love triangle ;////
Friends: everyone except kyouka
Enemies: kyouka she hates her very much, but that doesnt matter cuz kyouka is in coma
Hobbies: hanging out with friends, cute things, sweets and cool clothes. she also likes being quadruple agent cuz its rly exciting
Family: her parents died in an accident ;-; so she grew up in an orphanage
Ability and/or combat:
Ability name and reference: three abilities - Macbeth (foresight), Hamlet (time travel) and King Lear (resurrection)
Type of ability (combat, not combat): both combat and non combat
Special movement names (if the character has an ability): too many!!!
Special skills (like Ranpo’s deduction): wolf transformation (similar to Lovecraft's tentacle monster)
Ability description: u can guess u dumbo ; P
Weakness (physical and psychological): she has no weaknesses
Strength (physical and psychological): everything u can think of
Ability Power: 10/10
Speed (agility): /10
Luck: 1/10 she is very unlucky ever since the accident happened... i guess it's God's punishment..
Character quote: To be or not to be...
i think about my oc a lot!! i always give my best because i want her to be cute ;-; but everyone is hating on me ;-;
- 1 character just got only ONE ability.
- Or the character can be famous but it CAN'T be like THE BEST IN THE WORLD.
And something like: Why does her hair have too many colours?
she can be the best. william shakespeare is the besttt!!! romeo and juliet is amazing!!
she has more than one ability because she is special and the best what is so har d to understandxd
Dazai and chuuya is Soukoku. Is mean the Double Black.
And Kuroyukihime? Is the Black Snow Princess. And you just relize. Why does the snow black?
About the picture you draw ,All people i show them, they said that's exactly like Kyouka ( So that's why because you hate Kyouka? Because you jealous about her? ). Your drawing is like you just trace the original picture (Ecxept the mouth) and colour the different colour. I have never trace any picture in the anime even i have a OC.
I HATE KYOUKA so i erased her from the existence and drew kuroyukihime on top of her lol. i hate kyouka because she killed 35 people, and thats DISGUSTING!!!
And killed 35 people? How about you? Your OC just killed every children in the orphanage. Like ALL children in the orphanage it's mean your OC just killed more than 100 children? That's more DISGUSTING!
This is basically a definition (from wiki)
A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment. They can usually perform better at tasks than should be possible given the amount of training or experience.
Which your character happens to fall into.
She is seemingly perfect, with hardly any weaknesses or flaws.
It's good you have a character you like but to make a proper character they need flaws and weaknesses. Think of her as if she is a real person and create her based on that.
A character can be perfect but not too perfect.
You just have to make her as if she is a normal person, a normal regular girl. Her name is fine (although you should try to shorten it for the titles)
But people will see her as a mary-sue because she is seemingly perfect and flawless