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HOPELESSNESS

All the sadness, all the pain,
I can't make a difference.
My feelings have become a burden;
I want to throw them away.
Whether I hurt or be hurt,
It becomes pointless.

Memories that did exist,
I want to forget them.
But don't pry into my heart,
Or it will shatter from your touch.
Fragile as the tears that bleed,
These stains leave a mark.

Is it too late?
Times when I can't breathe,
Suffocating in lies.
The truth has blurred,
Leaving uncertainty behind.
Just let me sleep.

In dreams, I fall,
Hoping to never awaken.
I'm really depressed...
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gwack Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2003
weeeeeeeeejj! finally another one! Its been ages since the last one :P This is really good too! =) ^.^
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6d617474 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2003
I like the poem, you have a talent, and thus a reason not to be depressed. I can relate to this, I write similar work and i feel this conveys your feelings well.
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