Felarya: The Fairy And The Healer - Part 2
Felarya - Jade - The training begins (Pt2)
Felarya: The Fairy And The Healer - Part 1
Eh? What's going on here? First that retro scifi Rocket Frame 87 story, and now this? And a mature tag to boot? What's wrong with you Kululu? And where are Rinloh and Darin?
Umm, yeah. Rinloh and Darin are alive and well, and shall return shortly. I've been trying to take care of a couple unfinished projects. This story has been buzzing around my head since this summer, when I noticed I was on a plane on August 8. And it finally made its way to paper. Err… digital. A bit different than my other Felarya stories, but I hope you enjoy it. Comments as always, are most welcome.
Note: The flight I was on this summer did not actually end up in Felarya following the incident with the dimensional rift, but rather in a much less interesting dimension, so I won't bore you with the details of that.
I honestly can't imagine what you must have seen on that flight to make you think of the idea of this story, but I thank God for whatever disco bulb-carrying passenger sat next to you on that day
And I'm happy that you liked the fairy party!
I liked the structured beginning jumping from one protagonist to the next and again. It kept it interesting with a lot of room to develop the characters and the environment - pretty brilliant.
The action scenes - really believable, I was there.
Which, now that I think about it, is what kept me reading. The story felt alive and I could see me there, well, actually, I am very, very, very (!) happy I am not there. Although, fun humans, with predator fun and intoxicated fairies - LOL - who knows...
This is a really good long, short story. I wonder if you could submit it somewhere, hmmm
Very interesting characters and a good introduction, too. The more serious first part makes the fantastic progress all the more surprising.
First of all. I didn't see a story like that coming after all. I expected the continuation of Rinloh and Darin oder something apart from Felarya.
Still, the story was awesome. I can just say few basics like the whole setup was constructed very well and the descriptons of...close to everything... were vere colorful and detailed. I am far away from that level of skill! Though it might be not a shame since you are a native speaker.
The Idea of the story was interesting and it was nice to see u woving fairies into your Setup. You handled their behavior very believable and the "uncommon" touch of mature content fitted very well. All that entertained me very much.
To come to the main idea...from part to part...I couldn't stop laughing about the idea and its commitment to survive the encounter with the faires. I never read something like "party your way out of danger". I know keep in mind, should I ever visit Felarya....I bring my gaming equipment.
And last but not least, the "sentence of the story" : I would have quoted the same as FrenchSnack but since he already did it. I decided myself for the following: "Well if you make yourself *whisper* *whisper*, then we could *whisper* *whisper*" It put a pretty bright smile on my face, espeically since it didn't reveal the obvious and left a room for imagination to the readers. Also like that the acting person was that open to "such things" You sure brought some lewd humans to felarya xP
And using a champagne glass as a jacuzzi... I think that's what's called a wild party!