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:police: PLEASE WAIT !!! it's uploading.
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:new: The Oracle is featured in a Hotic Topic from deviantART :faint:
Thank you so much !!!!  that's great !!!!!

:star: UPDATES :  more pages / more effects and
                THE SOUNDTRACK :stereo:

:sherlock: please WATCH this motion-comic IN FULL VIEW with a good sound.

Thank you so much nunyerbidniss for your help
and LiamSharp for the opportunity to use the MADEFIRE  tool :woohoo:

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This could have had a massive potential. I'm not saying it's bad, not at all if I may say. But you should be aware that the subject and its base are leading to such high expectations when you used them at first. I was scared that things would jump at me, but they never did. I was scared that the sound will become more enchanting as it began so, and will sway me into the story, but it didn't. If you gave some scarier, more surprising elements, this would be mental. The design of the script also depresses the scary-mystical element that could have taken over this book. It's good, and since it has an amazing base, it's kind of sad that it's only good. Hope you understand what I mean <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
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Thanks a lot for the critique CheriOwen  .
This work  was made about years ago during the beta test  of the Motion Book Tool. And this motion comic is really  full of problems : technical  and narrative problems . 
Technically , for example some of the effects I used    disappeared during  an update  of the tool ... and as I was more trying to explore  the possibilities of the MADEFIRE Motion Book Tool , than to create a  real story . We can see that as a student work....
2 years ago I  was thinking about fixing The Oracle.... butI don't want to fixit because  I learned a lot from my mistakes on This work; and I can see the evolution of my work since that time . I keep also a big tenderness for that story. 
Well , I learned a lot during these last  5 years about the motion comics, and I m more and more exited by this media. As you say It could be mental !!!
So I hope that  my next works will be very cooOOOool ,  and your critique  is very welcome : it help me to stay focus  on what is working and on what is not !
I'll publish new motion comics  in few months .
I hope you'll enjoy it .
Thanks again !!!
Alexzandria44's avatar
absolutely amazing
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:blush: thanks a lot .
Oldshamus's avatar
I really liked this book Great stuff
krukof2's avatar
Thank you so much ....
A new book soon :)
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Thank you :blush: !!!!
QueenObscurePairings's avatar
also look at my new Ankou piece I did haa
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QueenObscurePairings's avatar
I may have to try to commission you one day for motion comic from you haa
krukof2's avatar
yeah good idea !!!!
QueenObscurePairings's avatar
Involving Ankou and Jewels for sure heh
RoseSparrow's avatar
This is a very clever short story :D.
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:blush: thank you so much :dance:
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Naaren's avatar
I think you should make these into a youtube series and make it viral for a living... just my thoughts ^^
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Yes You are right .

I m working on a new project , and I ll follow your advice !!!
Naaren's avatar
Oh good man I love when people branch out and grow!

If you still remember me send me a note/comment when you post it on youtube/wherever else you do.

Best of wishes.
greedysheep's avatar
J'ai pris du plaisir à lire ton histoire, quelle ambiance !
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Merci beaucoup !
I like this story very much~~
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:blush: thank you so much !!!! :dance:
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j'aime toujours autant !! *A*
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