little add on
Nice little story, Could of used a little more conflict, Other deagons roaming the skys to find a fresh mate?, Spike "Draking up" like secret of my excess & battling for his ladys honor?, Still you need to use the right words to carry the feelings and be less discriptive,:raritydespair::moustache::facehoof:
Spike looked over the line of mountain peaks , His only clue to where she might be was a group of circling dragons. Could she be there?
The closer he got to the swarm he could see a lone White Dragoness defending her perch, A cave just big enough to take shelter from the advances of all those wild uncouth Drakes. The fear he had was