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yeah well , made thi one ages ago i think this was my first serious attempt at a wallpaper , most people will say too filterish but the was hardly any filterwork *sigh , oh well ...
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chymera Featured By Owner May 16, 2001


plain... like my stuff, nice letterbox, and a cool blue.. really blurry to me though. could use some tune ups
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brazensix Featured By Owner May 13, 2001
Intersting idea. I like the soft colours you've made there, but the text really needs some work. You can barely read it against the background. I think with some highlighting and maybe some crazy line work you could make this a really nice piece. Good work.

Mathias

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afro Featured By Owner May 13, 2001   Interface Designer
to be honest..... its pretty crappy at the moment, but it has great potential

i not very good at picking filters in art but this one doesnt jump out at me as being a result of overuse of filters.

i think you need some more segmentation, say for example some lines to mark the cutoff for your radial eye thingy

then change the text... make it stand out a bit more...

and finally, to ease the plain black you should add some faded imagery for some atmosphere

you should re-do this peice a bit more... your first serious attempt need some tlc now that you're more experience.... it could be a masterpeice!

-the afro
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