This is the third project, a cover design for our mock-magazine cover project.
The image is from an earlier submission here
And comments on layout or style improvements would be appreciated.
The image is from an earlier submission here
And comments on layout or style improvements would be appreciated.
=3 I'm in a web-designing class... A slightly transparent background is great, If you have a non-interesting picture underneath; that picture is VERY INTERESTING, therefore you need to define the area around the text by a box; but the box needs to be very transparent to define both the area around the text and let you see the picture. I also recommend a thick border around the bar-code. =3
P.S. the Text over the box doesn't need to be transparent at all. If you give a little bit of transparency to the viewer, they want it all. The best thing to do is make it "Pop" by leaving it fully nontranslucent.
P.S. the Text over the box doesn't need to be transparent at all. If you give a little bit of transparency to the viewer, they want it all. The best thing to do is make it "Pop" by leaving it fully nontranslucent.
A solid layout and design.
Well balanced and not over crowded. It also frames the central figure well. Where the H E and the hand interesct works well with the semingly interaction of the desintergrating letters and ripling wallpaper really draws your eye to the title.
Well balanced and not over crowded. It also frames the central figure well. Where the H E and the hand interesct works well with the semingly interaction of the desintergrating letters and ripling wallpaper really draws your eye to the title.
I'm not a professional but from my times of doing yearbook I have to say this layout looks superb 
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