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The Beaver And The Tree

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Let the innuendos continue :D
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Amura-Of-Jupiter's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is a very nice painting style and I like the combination of typical painting shading with the crosshatch you have going. Though I would have used a bit more crosshatching because it seems like you didn't use it quite enough. I only see it being used in about 4 to 5 different spots (which is fine but it's making it look a little out of place)

Another thing I noticed is the lack of eye shine on Pinkie. I could be wrong and it could have been intended to be like that but to me personally it makes her look a little off since Fluttershy DOES have the eye shine. Just a little consistency nitpicking.

I like the simplicity you did with the background and I honestly admire how you did the trees. My only complaint with it is just more consistency issues (Fluttershy's tree being a different color than the others which again could have been intentional.

Again this is serious nitpicking.
The expressions, anatomy, shading and the rest are really REALLY well done. It's a very cute might I add suggestive concept and is overall a nice little scene, I admit I laughed out loud when I saw it. I know for a fact if it makes me laugh out loud your artwork has done its job!

Keep on painting!
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much or your critique :)

You are right about the crosshatching, it would have been better to either remove it or use it more ofter throughout the picture.

Pinkie's eyes are supposed to have that "soulless" or "leering" feel that is sometimes used in manga styles. Though I suppose a very soft ambient reflection could have been added to them anyway.
Amura-Of-Jupiter's avatar
Yeah I had a feeling there was a reason behind those eyes :P
Princesspoopy69's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

this is one of my favorite deviantarts by ANYONE ever! it is original, funny, and has two of my top 3 favorite ponies in it!

and the look on pinkies face... mixed with fluttershys reaction is the greatest thing ever! you have captured their personality, and how they would react in that situation PERFECTLY! keep making more like this, okay?

i dont know what to say and i have 27 characters minimum left... umm... this is awesome, and i love you for making it and make more. when i keep repeating my self it must get annoying i bet. so ill stop here. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

that is all.
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much for your critique :D
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LightReading2's avatar

in griffin brush off pinkie was against pranking fluttershy

goldorakx69's avatar
Pinkie: Hey Fluttershy if you are a tree, well I be the Beaver!
Fluttershy:..... I dont want to be a tree!
preston725's avatar
If Pinkie Decides To Kiss Fluttershy Then I Am Gonna Kill Pinkie!
Ghalaghor's avatar
Is she going to eat her out?
Queen-KittyKat's avatar
I'm favoritor N°2000 OMG!!!!
DJHiryu508's avatar
somehow I doubt the series would be as popular if it were called "my little beaver"

*snicker*
snowpony9177's avatar
There is just so much expression in this one picture which makes it more funny! 
MLPegasis4898's avatar
Hahahh! Nice!!! Love this!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
This piece makes me laugh.  I like it!
This is just whole new levels of creepy.
Sheat101's avatar
The title itself is an innuendo.

But the look on Pinkie's face and the sheer terror strewn onto Fluttershy's just makes this the funniest I've seen yet.
HereticalRants's avatar
I saved this to my porn folder
einsman's avatar
I'd like to be a- OH SHIT ABORT MISSION
FixyClary's avatar
*giggles at the random silliness that is this*
Kittty-Catt's avatar
Pinkie is scaring me too.
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