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Sleepy Belle

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LilSweetCats's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Very good, and very cute. Love your style, but the cutie mark on Cheerilee is a bit big, but overall such great artwork.

I love the extra little details you did, like lines on the floor to make it look like hay, and paintings in the background. The shading was very well done, sometimes I see crappy shading.

One little thing though, I personally think Ms.Cheerilee's left eye's iris and pupil should go a little bit more to the right, she seems like she is looking past Sweetie Belle, to whatever student might be next to Sweetie Belle. Oh and one more thing, Sweetie Belle's horn seems a bit big.

It looks very nice, indeed!
LilSweetCats's avatar
Np, it was very well made!
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much for your critique :)
PickyMcCritical's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is damn good, impressive even. I normally look for things I don't like in pictures that I do like (hence the name Picky), but this is just so well done. It's actually the first of this gallery I've seen (a friend likes Cheerilee and linked it).

I guess for starters, Cheerilee's cutie mark looks a bit big. I didn't notice until the frowns on the flowers drew my attention (which are amusing, btw). Whoa, and Sweetie Belle's horn looks a bit big, too. Length seems to depend on height (Celestia's is very long and she's tall), and Sweetie Belle's looks a bit wide for her head and longer than Twilight's.

The hay-looking floor is good, but the wall seems so barren. Assuming they're in a young school (and this picture follows the floor in the episodes), it's so pale with only two pictures. It only gives us Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle to look at, whose colors contrast the pale wall in this elementary school? The idea is funny, the picture is neat, and the style is awesome, but more can always be done. This is far from cluttered.
LordMarukio's avatar
I think the cutie mark looks fine.......but the horn is a little too big
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you for the critique :)
Culu-Bluebeaver's avatar
:giggle: ... BTW: It's no surprise this doesn't work. Cheerilee has been Seetie Belle's teacher for years (actually I think the CMC have been longer in elementary school than you would normally stay there, but at least not as long as Bart and Lisa who are stuck there forever), so she most likely knows, that Sweetie Belle doesn't need glasses. 

On a different note: Wonderful work :clap: you have great humor :thumbsup: :+fav: 
Culu-Bluebeaver's avatar
You are welcome, and sorry for the typo. I meant to write SWEETIE Belle of course. 
shoji9's avatar
I imagine Cheerilee deals with sleepy fillies a lot, and probably has some sure-fire technique to wake her up.
JoeyWaggoner's avatar
How she looks so awake we'll never know.
Centaur71's avatar
the ol' 'eyes on glasses' trick works every time...NOT!
Sketch-Shepherd's avatar
If I was Cheerilee those eyes would have given me nightmares.
DreamRevolution's avatar

Gotta love that Classic Simpsons joke. C:…

Madame-Finitevus1890's avatar
This is so cute- this makes me think of Norman Rockwell's work :D
DolphinSilverwolf's avatar
:iconcheerileeplz::iconsaysplz: Ms. Sweetie Belle, there will be no firin' of lazors in this classroom!
plushbrony101's avatar
wow um Mrs. Cheerilee you look pissed somepony should make a wallpaper with just Mrs. Cheerilee like that
catz537's avatar
Oh Sweetie, I can relate (:
621Chopsuey's avatar
:iconsweetiedisappointplz: Sorry, Mrs. Cheerilee. I have insomnia.
:iconscootalooplz: What are you, a dictionary?
templar127's avatar
Me when listening to Physics lecture in high school! XD
Blackvegetable's avatar
Oh Sweetie Belle, you big goof! :rofl:
Alluris's avatar
Cheerilee's face.

That's all I can say about this is, "Cheerilee's face." Here's my cash.
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