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"Hoof socks, juice box, and a bunny hood sweater. I'm God-tier moé and I don't give a flying feather!"

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WyeZee's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First thing I should say: you've done an excellent job on coloring this piece.

At first, from looking at the sketch you've done of this piece, I was thinking it was going to be a bright daytime setting, but this dark and gloomy setting really mixes well with Fluttershy's color; her bright yellow fur really catches the eye and mists flowing below her takes some color away from the background, which is a good thing because Fluttershy is the focus of the piece and that a brighter background would take the eye away from what really matters.

The detail you've placed into this piece is great; you have the clothing folds, patches of dirt stains, strands of hair, even the fur on her legs are visible. You have a good eye and an even greater taste for detail.

But I must say, while your unique style is a real treat, this piece is rather generic; you have the pose, the dark and eerie setting, the 'looking-off-into-the-distance-and-looking-cool' look, but this all seems too cliche for me.

If you are really looking to 'wow' the crowd, you will need to do more than just appealing to the eye, but you should also give your work a meaning and appeal to not just the audiences' mind, but your mind as well.
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much for the critique :)

Yeah, I see your point and will keep in mind to "overcharge" my ideas some more in the future to make them even more exciting :D
WyeZee's avatar
Thank you very much for the reply!

And thank you for taking my critique into consideration! It's my first and only critique that I've ever done, but I plan to do more in the future, so I'll be looking out for new pieces from you! :D

Keep up the good work!
TheAmoryWarsSoldier9's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

One of the things that I especially like is the wing design. When I see some illustrations of pegasi, every so often I'll feel that the design of the wings doesn't match the rest of the illustration because it's too over the top or too under-developed, but that's not the case here. The wings are just as detailed as the rest of picture. I also like the detail that makes us imagine what she could have gone through like the band-aid on her leg, the scuffs on her shoes (I guess that's what they are), the dirt on her (fake) ear, the rip in her hood, and the fact that her hair isn't perfectly put together and has small strands sticking out. I also feel that when coupled with the scuffs, the rip, and the band-aid, the out of place strands make me make it seem as if she isn't truly phased by what has happened so far because there's not very many sticking out. I also find it funny that she pulled off a bad-ass look while sipping from a juice box because when I think of "bad-ass": a juice box isn't even near the top spot. In my eyes, I find nothing wrong with this art piece.

Kudos /]
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much for the critique :D
LevelSketchthePegasi's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Extremely good, it just keeps getting better from the lineart to this. The Details are excellent and the environment is amazingly accurate to the Everfree forest and Fluttershy looks great! I love the shading and colours and how the trees look like they are reaching out to Fluttershy, yet she has her juice box and is brave anyway. This picture fits the name Dangershy perfectly. It's a thumbs up from me. Excellent work all around. Amazing. Nuff Said. It definitely deserves an amazing rating, from vision to originality to technique through to impact and it's overall devious rating. I hope everyone else agrees with me <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you very much for the critique :3
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adventuerfoxsan's avatar
She rules the forest, taking no (Squeak) from no mother (Squeaker).

What? you think she's cute well (Squeak) you (Squeaker), this is DANGER (Squeaking) SHY.

One time I saw some (Squeak)boy trashing her garden, stomping all over like he was some yak on a cupcake induced tantrum.

I told him to leave but (Squeaker) didn't listen. Found the poor (Squeaker) at the police station with Poison Joke shoved up his (Squeak) and (Squeak).     
awesome picture!
you're welcome!!
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This user has traced your drawing.
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
Thank you for the info :)
raymirxavi's avatar
oh my god my fluttershy is a punk rock well more to my likeing now
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"Twilight Sparkle. It's been what, five years?"

"Fluttershy! You escaped Ponyville!"

"No, I escaped Trixieville. And chances are, there won't ever be a Ponyville if you don't get a move on."
Rozbojnik2's avatar
Ahh Wonderfull. It is something what i will have on my Desktop without Excuses. Many Thanks
KP-ShadowSquirrel's avatar
I'm happy that you like it :3
Rozbojnik2's avatar
I'm even more than just like it! :3
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