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"You ready?" Hanna's words whispered through the cramped darkness of the hotel room. A pair of strong yet tender hands pushed me against the wall. I heard Hanna's rapid breathing, as her face drew closer. In utter darkness, her lips found mine, silencing any objections I had in mind. I felt the sweet smell of her skin, the sunny fragrance of her hair, the warmth of her body pressing against mine. Hanna was strong, and for all my powers, I could never resist her, even if I wanted.

Before I knew it, my hands reached up to hold the back of her head, prolonging our kiss. Her tongue entered my mouth, feeling obviously at home. It touched mine, first tentatively, and then more and more dominantly, exploring my mouth as if it found its way in for the first time. My arms were now on Hanna's back, pressing her body to mine, breast to breast, heart to heart, striving to melt them together.

We broke off, panting heavily. Hanna's eyes reflected the dim moonlight. A trail of saliva dripped down from the corner of my mouth, but before I could wipe it, she stopped my hand and gently licked it off with her tongue.

"You okay?" she asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine."

She stepped back pulling me after her. A step and a half later, she pushed me onto our double bed and slowly removed my shoes. Until then, I barely realized how much my feet were aching from today's walks. Raising myself on my elbows, I watched Hanna place my socks by the bed and hold my soles in her hands and squeeze them to help blood along. It tickled but felt nice. I closed my eyes and tried my best not to moan. Something wet and warm closed around my toe. I peered down and saw Hanna lick it.

"Too much!" I protested.
"Oh, shut up," she mumbled, massaging my sole. I tried to give her a stern gaze but it felt too good. Leaning back, I let her have her way with me.

The sensation that began in my feet carried on upwards towards my knees and to where the legs met, and further towards the chest and head. I found myself paralyzed, under a spell made up of equal portions of daydream and pleasure.

Abruptly, the sensation stopped. I heard rustling and opened an eye... and was blinded by a bright light the next moment.

"Oh crap! I'm so sorry!" Through the tears, I saw Hanna's face hovering over me. The bed lamp was lit, now bearably dimmed.
"You should have warned me..." I accused, cuddling up to her.
"I am sorry. Do your eyes hurt?" A soft kiss on my eyelid, then the other.
"Dummy," I sighed, letting her go. That was a mistake. Before I knew it, she was already undoing my belt.
"Hey!" I protested. "Close the curtains, at least! This neighborhood can do without a free girl-on-girl show!"
"Don't worry," she murmured, now busy with my zipper. "All respectable Danes are fast asleep already."

That wasn't very reassuring, so I turned over onto my stomach and crawled across the bed to the window. Hanna used the opportunity to yank off my pants.

Determined not to give in, I continued crawling to the curtain and prevailed. Now the room was illuminated only by the dim light of the bed lamp. Before I turned around, Hanna's fingers crawled underneath my blouse and run across my spine, making me freeze. In my mind's eye, I saw her mischievous grin. Her fingers crept further up until they reached my bra. The lock clicked helplessly and it slumped down under my shirt.

I did not dare to move, fearing to lose last shreds of my dignity, but Hanna didn't need my cooperation. She turned me onto my back again and unbuttoned my shirt. As she did so, I noticed that her own blouse didn't have buttons and it really ticked me off. Finally, my shirt was undone, and the bra landed next to my shoes. Hanna stopped for a moment, letting out a happy sigh. It embarrassed me, so I looked away.

Hanna leaned to my chest. Her tongue played with one nipple; her fingers closed around the other. A pleasant feeling of returning home from a long journey overwhelmed me, making me forget where I was. My body arched upward. My arms wrapped around her neck and shoulders.

She laughed at me, turning me on the side. Her free hand slid down my stomach to between my legs. I cried out when she touched me there for the first time. Her fingers rubbed me through the panties. She escaped my weakened grasp, sitting up beside me. I stared at her and in the next moment, cried out again in anguished ecstasy when she pulled my panties up, cutting in painfully between my lips.

I clenched my thighs together as hard as I could but Hanna pushed her knee between them. I wasn't thinking clearly anymore, so I tried to resist but she proved stronger once more. After a brief struggle, I gave up and let her in. Our bodies pressed towards each other, trembling; our legs intertwined. She was still fully clothed but it didn't matter. She planted her hands next to my head. Her hips moved, first slowly, then with more and more force, rubbing the rough fabric of her shorts against my soaking wet panties. I moaned and tried to match her moves but it must have been more intense for me. Before long, I came so close to climaxing...

And that's when something stirred around my neck, and Hanna drew away with a sharp cry. Confused, I rose up to see blood on her hand. She looked equally confused. In the dim light, her face was pale with pain and shock. It dawned to me.

"Linda, you ludicrous cub! How many times did I..."

The little two-tailed fox materialized around my neck and scuttled off under the bed, yapping weakly.

"Oh God, Hanna, I am so sorry..."

I grabbed Hanna's hand. The blood was already dripping onto the sheets and I didn't want this to get any messier. She inhaled sharply, her eyes finally focusing again. She was breathing fast. I had to stop the bleeding and with no first aid kit in sight, I resorted to traditional medicine. Her blood tasted... just like normal blood. She winced as I touched her finger with my tongue, feeling for the wound. At last, she opened her mouth.

"I swear, Greta, one day I will get to that jealous little red-tailed bitch..."

With her finger still in my mouth, I had hard time answering intelligibly. Linda protested loudly from under the bed.

"I will deal with you later, red." The squealing ceased.

For a while, I nursed Hanna's finger with my mouth and nearly missed the moment when it turned into something other than a slightly inappropriate healing.

A second finger entered my mouth. I wanted to protest but it was rather difficult with my mouth gagged. Instead, I soon found myself sucking on her fingers, feeling more aroused by this than I probably should have. I must have been completely red. Hanna's expression was that of confident glee. My body felt limp as she pushed me back onto my back, unceremoniously yanked off my panties, and pressed her lips against mine.

I looked down to see her smiling face and snow white hair between my legs, so close to the place of pleasure that all the remaining worries skipped my head, leaving me a small pile of trembling moaning desire, as Hanna's tongue went in narrowing circles, as if testing an unfamiliar terrain.

I cried out as her lips closed around my throbbing bud and started sucking on it, first gently and then more and more energetically. Her fingers, the same fingers that I sucked just moments ago, still sticky with my saliva, entered me a moment later, thrusting inward and down. Not letting go with her mouth, Hanna started pushing me rhythmically, setting my whole body in motion.

The sensation was intense. So intense, I lost control of my voice. I stuck a knuckle between my teeth to stop myself from screaming my head off. Hanna's thrusts became stronger and more demanding with each second. The feeling of bliss spread through my trembling body and as soon as it reached my head, my brain went blank.

I fell back, panting and sweating. Hanna freed herself of my limp legs and lay down next to me. Her breath was even and her face was calm. I was unable to speak, too weak to even turn my face to her, so when she put me on my side again, I was grateful. The touch of her hands resonated in my body. I wanted to snuggle up to her, to rub my naked body against her clothes, to dissolve myself in her. Instead, she hugged me first. Her chin rested on the top of my head. I heard her breathing. Her arms around me encompassed my entire world at that moment. No matter what went on outside, I knew that this was the place where I belonged. A few breaths later, I pulled away from her and sat up. My head was still wobbly. Hanna sat up, too, with a curious expression.

This night, our crazy encounter in a cheap hotel room, wasn't just mine, it belonged to us both. I crawled to the head of the bed, where it met the wall and rested my back against it.

"Come here," I said, spreading my arms and legs to her.

Hanna hesitated for a moment, but moved up to me, resting her back on my chest, her head, on my shoulder.

"I love you, my Hanna," I whispered into her ear, as I pulled off her blouse and threw it away. She didn't answer, but her breaths got faster.

I nibbled on her ear, as my fingertips ran up and down her slim waist. She gasped. The smell of her hair was maddening. I wanted to take her, to do all the things she has done to me earlier and more... but that wouldn't work. Hanna didn't like it rough.

So I caressed her body until it relaxed. As I felt it slump down against me, I let go of her ear and moved down to her neck. I lifted up her bra, setting her cute, firm breasts free. My hands were small, conveniently so to fondle them. I pulled gently on her nipples, as my tongue slowly slid up and down the side of her neck. Hanna moaned again. Her hand darted down but quickly drew away. I let my own hand slide across her stomach and unbuttoned her shorts. She stiffened for a moment, as she always did, so I stopped and returned to caressing. When she relaxed again, I returned to her already wet panties. We'll both have to buy new underwear tomorrow, I thought. Hanna was panting quietly. She was very sensitive if you knew the spots. I had practice.

Slowly, my hand slid underneath her panties, playing with her bud and lips directly. Two fingers slid into her, and started moving back and forth. It was warm, and wet, and sticky.

On a whim, I withdrew my hand and licked my fingers clean. Hanna watched me, mesmerized, blushing crimson red to the roots of her hair. Dummy, she whispered, as my hand went back down. I was speeding up, feeling her body tense more and more, when she suddenly turned to kiss me, her arm bent at an awkward angle to hold my head. I did my best not to think about her exposed armpit at that moment, and to answer her tongues' advances as best as I could. It was hard keeping it up on all three fronts at once but I've had experience. Finally, she broke off the kiss and slumped down, shuddering a little. She came very quietly. She always did. At first, I thought she was faking it for my sake but then I realized that she was afraid to lose control even for a second. I thought it was cute.

I hugged her tightly and pulled her closer to me. I was exhausted. Resting my chin on her shoulder, I closed my eyes.

"Tired?" Hanna asked.
"Mmmmh," I answered sleepily.
"Come on. Let's get you under the sheets."

She helped me get up and settled me into a small armchair by the bed.

"Oh snap." She stood before the bed, mustering it critically. The sheets we didn't care to remove from it now sported two large wet spots, poignantly tapped by a trail of small spots of blood.
"I am not sleeping on this, girlfriend." Hanna said emphatically.

I just mumbled something unintelligible.

"Wait here, OK?" She said. "I'll go ask the reception guy for a spare sheet."

It was cold. As I wrapped my arms around myself to warm up, a weak squeal came from under the bed again.

"Bad Linda. You can come out now, the scary Hanna is gone."

Her nose emerged from under the bed, and a moment later, she leapt onto my lap with feline grace. She was fully corporeal now... and warm.

"You have been a bad girl, Linda. But it's OK because you keep me from catching cold."

She yapped happily and curled into a small furry ball. I dozed off and stirred only when Hanna's palm touched my cheek. Linda's warmth was now around my neck again.

"Come on."

She must have changed the sheets while I was asleep. I crawled into the bed. Hanna turned off the lights and wrapped us both in a large blanket.

I didn't feel like talking, but I did not feel sleepy anymore, either. For a while, I just lay there, listening to Hanna's breath and watching her sleep.

"You want to say something?" Hanna opened her eyes.
"No... well, yes, but..."
"Say it, stupid," she laughed.

I hesitated for a minute.

"Hanna, why do you love me so much?"

She rose up in darkness and looked down at me, smiling.

"Oh, that. That is simple. You make me be what I like to be."

I thought about it for a moment.

"So do you," I said. "I love you, Hanna."
"I love you, too."

She fell asleep first.
A good friend of mine once complained that all of my characters feel ethereal, as if lacking any sexual drive or, indeed, physical bodies. I wrote this short piece to prove her wrong. Took me quite a while--slightly over four months--but I am happy with the results. ^^

That said, this is my first attempt at writing erotic fiction, much less lesbian one, so don't judge it too harshly, please. ^^; And if you like it, please comment. ;)

PS: Hanna and Greta are original characters from my on-going urban fantasy/horror series named after them. New readers interested in Linda the Fox's origin are invited to my gallery: [link] .

EDIT 01.09.2011: I totally stole a wonderful piece of fanart drawn by my devoted fan ~MolyLoo for this chapter's preview. If you like it, please visit her gallery and fave it. ^^ Actually, it's not an immediate illustration but a flashback, since Hanna has cut her hair about two stories ago.
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romantica12 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW! Woo, that was very... exhilarating Koveras, really! This piece of erotica is certainly a an incredible story and very emotional, it gave me a warm feeling in my soul and I love it, I love it very much. :D
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My reaction: [link]

So... thank you. ^__^
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romantica12 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm, you're certainly most welcome. ^__^
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cannykins Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was wonderfully done. It can be hard doing erotic fiction but you did this very well from the emotions down to the body movements without going into too much detail (which I enjoy either which way). You definitely showed how much they sexually desire one another and love each other.
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:squee:

Thank you very much! You have just erased my fears about my abilities at writing erotic fiction. :blush: ^^;
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cannykins Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good. I like it. I definitely have to read up on the rest of your stories. Thank MolyLoo for having linked it in her fanart cuz that's what led me here. Again very nice. I'm excited to read the rest of your writings.

(little bit of an critique. you shouldn't have any "-"s in your words. You have several and they shouldn't be used. there's also a few grammatical errors but nothing big. very well done.)
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. ^^ Molly and I go a long way back together; we even collaborated a few times. Now we are just each other's respective biggest fans. :XD:

My other stories are not so great, I am afraid. But meh, at least they offer some backstory. ^^;

And thanks for pointing the thing about hyphens! Man, this is embarrassing. I have originally written and edited the text in MS Word, with syllabification turned on to save space. When I copied it over to the dA, it seems I took the hyphens with the rest of the text. ^^;
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL its okay. I help my gf with her grammar all the time. .... and she pretends to help me with my German, though I think she doesn't because she thinks its cute when I say it wrong.... WHICH TOTALLY DOESN'T HELP ME LEARN IT!!
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your girlfriend sounds a lot like myself, actually, the kind of person that enjoys tormenting our loved ones. :D Don't worry, we only do that to people we really love and not out of malice. ^^; I am sure if you ever get a serious, life-or-death need to learn German, she would help you with all her strength. :3
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know but that's not the point. lol she likes my accent (I have an accent? I know I'm southern but idk what an American accent is) but that also means she doesn't exactly want me to pronounce things right ... mupf (cuz I atleast know that word... that one and dummkopf)
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, well, I think you should indulge her, then. ;)
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i try but I don't know much in German
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
All the more reason to learn more of it. :D On a side note, Hanna and Greta in my stories are both German. Hanna is from around Dresden and Greta is from Munich. ^^
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RoadMart Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
Indeed, pretty good for a first time. (Oh the puns!) Nothing to really critique, either. Nice job. c:
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ^^/
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RoadMart Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
You're very welcome~ :meow:
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Leetmorry Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For a first attempt this is pretty OMG-AAAA-TOTALLY-AWESOME! )
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hmph. Baka Molly. *>__>*
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ElenoreFangirl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
For a first attempt this was quite good.
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koveras-alvane Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. ^^
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