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Ruby Rose's fateful choice... by korben600 Ruby Rose's fateful choice... by korben600
Yeah, as you can probably guess, I figured out how to put all of the panels of my short and terrible comic onto one page. So my legions of adoring fans can read it and marvel....PFFT HA! Yeah right. This thing's kind of terrible, but I put a lot of effort into it, so I'm uploading it anyway. Criticism is welcome, I know it's bad, but I'd prefer to know why it's bad in the event I ever want to do this sort of thing again. The only way I'm going to get better is to fail miserably. 

So basically, all criticism is welcome, that of the art color, shading, and proportions, grammar, or even the humor. (Yes this was supposed to be a humorous comic, a dark one, but it was intended to be funny. Yes, if anyone asks, I will explain the joke.) 

BTW, I'm going to get rid of two of the other three separate pages of my comic. Having them as separate pages was a mistake, so I'm gonna delete two, but the other has my first "favorite" while on Deviantart, so I'm gonna keeep that one for sentimental purposes. I'll just call it a preview (even if it is the final panel)
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Submitted on
December 15, 2017
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