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Just a little warning, for those who don't know me that well.  I can be rough. When I say rough, I mean a steaming pile of shit from the Japanese tsunami that currently in mid-Pacific as I make my way to the US rough.
I do not make critiques of Pencil Drawings / Anime / Fan Fiction / Etchi or anything your children masturbate too. Because it's not art, its your home drawings on paper that are meant for your grandchildren to laugh at and not photographed and to be displayed on deviantArt to receive Critique. Its "Digital waste" that's polluting this fine community with children and animal pornography, and builds false prophets of no talent for future generations to look up to. Ain't going to part of your evolution...

I'm not trying to be an ass, I will be constructive and happy if I get a chance to make critiques for artists that I like.
That being said the moment you POST a :thumbnail: in the comments below, I will reupload your artwork and give you some proper respect right on the image. Highlighting out the sections that matter most to me.

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