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Star Mares 1.3.11: Missed Connections



During her time on Doctor Who, Nicola Bryant made a point of saying "all these corridors look the same" in every story to lampshade the fact that they were the same set from different angles.  I at least have the luxury of reversing shots without worrying about chirality too much (since the show does it all the time).  Of course, I also have the self-imposed rule about 'background' characters never upstaging the 'main' characters, which almost gave me problems in the last row there...

Originally, Gracenote was supposed to encounter Skywalker, Soda and Growlbeakka waiting by the turbolift during their 'prisoner transfer' ruse, get glared at by the griffon, and decide to take the next lift.  But I ended up changing the sequence of events relative to the film plot, necessitating some rescripting (but it meant that I was able to add back a line that I'd liked but previously cut, so it's all good).  There's still a tiny remnant of the old sequence coming up on the next page.


On a side note: I've finally seen the new film.  It's good.  It isn't great, and I'm not going to do it as part of this comic: I'm trying to maintain as much of My Little Pony's tone as possible, and EpVII is even darker than EpV.  Given that many of you have expressed thanks for keeping the grimdark out of the comic (and I'm having enough difficulty keeping that resolution as I start work on EpV), it's simply incompatible with my trajectory for this story.  I never intended to venture beyond the original trilogy to begin with, so it's no skin off my nose :)

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albedoequals1's avatar
My favorite part of this comic so far is the cross-eyed look the ponies have when they're getting clocked.  I'm a terrible person.