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Star Mares 1.2 .1: All According to Plan

This page underwent a lot of revision between draft and final form.  Originally, Cookiecutter was just going to be annoyed at Maple Leaf's nervousness (because Cookiecutter is a very blunt pony), but that seemed excessively mean-spirited, even for her.  Then when I was deciding on what font to use for the visual representation of Maple's jitters, I settled on a fairly bold one, and on a whim decided that everypony (except possibly Wind Whistler) could actually see it.  This worked so well that I kept it up as a running gag over the next few pages, until I got tired of thinking of synonyms for 'fear'.

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Centaur71's avatar
Of all the times she had to pick being a total scaredy-pony, she had to pick today!
I can think of plenty of worse things than getting separated on board a super-secret ultimate weapon of doom. Like getting separated in front of a super-secret ultimate weapon of doom.
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SentinelWolf5's avatar
Cookie Cutter gained a sudden case of extreme lisp for a second there. I hope that isnt a bad thing.

Fantastic work, i am really enjoying this comic
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She's talking with a comlink in her mouth.
SentinelWolf5's avatar
Ohhhh. That makes more sense. =]
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I think that's why my friends keep me around - I make them seem a little less crazy.
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Are these the main ponies the story is about? Or are we going to get into Luke and Leia and characters like that?
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The third paragraph here should explain:…
mlpslightningbolts's avatar
so not really about them at all awww
I don't like background ponies much, at all but i'll survive
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