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It's a new interactive project - soon we will se how it will go with your help.
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:iconwhippingginga:
Great idea, this interactive story! And the drwings gave us a good introduction.

My idea: the mother says to the father what he saw and he feels that he must correct her immediatly. Alexandra is called to her parents, they explain what her mother saw and that she will be punished. They force her to undress and bend over the table, her mother grabing her hands. Her father takes his belt and belt her, beating her with the buckle. (She prefers to be punished by her mother, she never hits her with the buckle, and gives her less lashes with less force). We may imagine that they have an old belt used only to punish her, hangng in a nail in her bedroom, in front of her bed, just to remember her all the time what happens if she doesn«t behave properly!
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transmuth Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful art!
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:iconkraak1000:
kraak1000 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
like it already!
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:iconkindinov:
kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Glad to hear!
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:iconmahashiva001:
mahashiva001 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Nitpicking time: "Her mother caught her while kissing the neighbor's son in the backyard"--sounds like it was her mother who was kissing the neighbor's son. :D 

Drop the word "while," and everything will be OK.
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kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Naughty mother... Thank you very much!
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:iconmahashiva001:
mahashiva001 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016
Glad to be of help. :-)

And--yes, I did notice that her dad has converted to Protestantism. :D
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:iconkindinov:
kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Usual thing...
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Almos666 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Beautiful - how will this story develop?
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:iconkindinov:
kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
It's a secret for now. But you will know soon!
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:iconwhippingginga:
whippingginga Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Very good image and interesting project!
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:iconkindinov:
kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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:iconmontycrusto:
montycrusto Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016   Traditional Artist
Oh I like this a lot, Kindinov!!  Beautifully drawn, you have perfect technique.  Lovely!  :)
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:iconmahashiva001:
mahashiva001 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Ditto that--everything Monty said! :-)

Is it just me, or does Alexander really look a little bit like a Russian Gypsy (Руска́ Рома́)?
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:iconkindinov:
kindinov Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for kind words!
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:iconmontycrusto:
montycrusto Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016   Traditional Artist
:) :iconcheersplz:
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