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Shouldn't poke fae...

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Because they might be capable of more than just smacking your finger. >w>

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Bethelina's avatar
You've captured their personalities very well!! :D I need to get back around to reading the rest of PL1's story. Ahhh, takes me back to my lurker days when I was too scared to tell anyone I liked anything.... :XD:
Kindii's avatar
Well in your absence, it's being re-written. So fresh stuff to read. : D

Silly Beth. It's the internet. You STILL can't have an opinion. 8'D
Or wait...too scared to comment on anything? You should be! People TOTALLY hate getting comments on anything they post. They will DESTROY you. D8< Run! Run Simba and never return!
Maybe I should have slept longer. Loopy -w-
Bethelina's avatar
Sweetness!! :D

Simba Big No 
PL1's avatar
;w;  I was a lurker too.  It's still scary to work up the courage to comment on something sometimes.
Bethelina's avatar
:faint: No kidding. Your story was one of the very first I read here on dA. :)
PL1's avatar
Oh wow!  :)  I'm glad you liked it then~
I've been doing the second draft.  It's fun to go back and rewrite those old scenes.  ^-^
Bethelina's avatar
I like it a lot... like, A LOT..... Tomoyo Shy Icon  Your characters really have strong and definitive personalities, and your voice is very clear and descriptive... :blush: revamp 

Yeah, I saw that you have been posting a rewrite! :D (Man I really want to rewrite my stuff too, but I know that if I allow myself to do that, it will never get finished. Gotta finish before I allow myself to touch it for a rewrite... ^^;) Haha, I can't wait until I have the time to sit down and read a bunch of people's stories that I've gotten very far behind with! XD
PL1's avatar
:iconblushplz:  Oh, thank you very much!  It feels great to get such wonderful feedback!

No rushing, after all, stories are meant to be fun, not a chore.  :)
Filanwizard's avatar
its usually unwise to poke a fae.   They might shrink you a whole bunch and turn the tables!
Kindii's avatar
Seriously! Guy needs to watch where he pokes. O.o
VideoWizard2006's avatar
I wonder if Bowman knows enough magic to suddenly make it where Jacob is the one getting poked, perhaps by someone bigger, or by swapping sizes. Probably why it's best not to mess with fae...
Kindii's avatar
I'm a big fan of scenarios where two characters start on opposite ends of the size spectrum and swap. But I don't think this is one of those cases. XD
PL1's avatar
Oh, Bowman WISHES he knew more magic!  The vengeance pokes would be many and unmerciful!  >3
blcksheep's avatar
In that case, he might not be smiling for longer if he keeps pokin' then. :O
Kindii's avatar
Or maybe he gets lucky and this is a non-magical fairy. But why take the risk??? OAO
Phoenix-FireMage's avatar
I have just finished reading the entire story. They look great!
Kindii's avatar
I remember reading a few chapters way back when they were first posted, but I really need to re-read it beginning to end.
I take it you recommend reading it? :3
Phoenix-FireMage's avatar
Yes, it's very good. Somewhat heart wrenching, but still very good.
iowaguy1979's avatar
now the BITING begins!  too funny!

great job, Kindiichan!
Kindii's avatar
Om nom nom human flesh! Mwahaha.
PL1's avatar
Biting would probably be the next course of action, knowing Bowman.  He's got sharp teeth for a little guy.  >.<
Phoenix-FireMage's avatar
He did bite Jacob in a very similar situation...
PL1's avatar
Exactly.  Poke at your own risk!  XD
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