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THANK YOU `CookiemagiK and *Tifa22 for wasting some minutes of their lives on trying to make this a gif:lmao:
I got it right in the end:noes:


I NEED YOUR SUGGESTIONS....
....or else I eat your head instead


I wanna know how to make this look less lame:dummy:BECAUSE IT'S REALLY LAME:crying: Too lame to be true:slow:


Pixelling and animating ain't easy when your dog tries to eat your tablet pen or your mouse or whatever you put your hand on >________>
Also, this came from an msn convo (98% doodles:lmao:) between me and `CookiemagiK:slow:
The last thing I have to say is....
SUPERCHERRY!
Alright, you can give me your suggestions now <:
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miksmoteHobbyist General Artist
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This is the first critique i'm writing but I will thread it as I would make any other comment: fair and simple.

The animation on the tracks of the tank and the running victim are great. As I've read on other comments, some sort of indication that the tank is heavy(shadow or dust from the sand)would work perfectly.
You could also add some more background fill to improve the sence of 'moving',for example some nice and simple clouds who pass by would enhance this already nice deviation further.

If you're up for experimenting I'd try to add more animation on the blade. Try copying the saw's sharpies and move it a little to the side and have both this new and original saw-sharpies layer show up simultaniously. I think that would work for animation on the bladesaw. Then have the yellow emote (poor fellah)move up and down to give a sence that he's still being ripped.

I'm no pro at animation but I'd give these things a try. Apart from what I said, you've done a stunning job on the tank. The sand looks great, the sky is smooth. And I just saw you've got Dr. Specz in there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Nice job.

I hope this critique will be of any help and I apoligize for any spelling mistakes or long sentences I might have used.
KimRaiFan's avatar
Thanks for the critique <3
I shall try and experiment your suggestions:la:
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miksmoteHobbyist General Artist
Nice, can't wait to see the results :iconveryexcitedplz:
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Vivienne-MercierHobbyist Artisan Crafter
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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Holy cow, a tank with a giant chainsaw attached! If the Nazis had thought of this, World War II would have turned out a lot different. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> This is such a great, funny emoticon. I love seeing emotes that are amusing, yet twisted and a little creepy.

For improvements, I would make a shadow under the tank, and maybe some tracks going out behind it, just to make it look heavier. The chainsaw should look as if it can move up and down--otherwise, it can't reach its victims on the ground. Maybe have it actually moving up and down a bit, to show the action. I'd say to make the blade spinning, but it appears to be jammed up at the moment. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> The blue smiley, running madly away, looks so hilarious! His hands could be flailing a bit, too, but he looks great otherwise.
KimRaiFan's avatar
Thank you for the critique!:love:
I'll make sure to improove this somehow:giggle:
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Vivienne-MercierHobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! It's a really great emoticon. Can't wait to see what other cool ideas you come up with. A lawn mower with a giant belt sander on the front? I guess victims would get exfoliated to death. :slow:
KimRaiFan's avatar
:lmao:
I'm not much into violence xDD
this came out in msn convos:slow:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
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I say this is a brilliant and funny idea of mixing two things dangerous into one. The animation and the expression is well made too, so is the pixel work on the tank.

Jut a bit suggestion, I think you should fix up some part of the tank which are looking jagged right now around the front. Also, I think the chainsaw would look more dangerous if it's animated. I would like to see that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

As for the emotes on the tank, wouldn't it be better if you can add in some expression on them too? Maybe a sinister laugh or two.

Overall, the work is okay but will be good if you can make some improvement accordingly as whoever seen this will definitely make their day.
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I completely agree with your suggestions:la: Some evil expressions won't do any harm, I guess:giggle:

And yesh, I shall try to make the chainsaw spin!:eager: Once I figure out...how...to actually...do it D:
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Alright, good luck with that. It shouldn't be hard to make it spin so you can do it. :D
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Yesh, I'll try my best:eager:
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yasminapopoviciHobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
DaFurryOne's avatar
And I was just thinking about your group, EmoteZ Make emotes, not war
Scorpion81's avatar
Make the ground green and a skyline on the horizon. =-=
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AkeudiStudent Digital Artist
lol, so cool :D
ceimlokote69's avatar
you forgot to put trees
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Sonic260Hobbyist General Artist
A mega tank and a chainsaw combined? That's it, we're screwed.
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miksmoteHobbyist General Artist
Nicely animated! The expressions on the faces look great :D
KimRaiFan's avatar
Thank you <3
I think think the running animation is a bit patchy >.>"
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yayz blood!
Toxic-Fox-Girl's avatar
Cut cut cut! :la:

I think the chainsaw should move, too! :dummy:
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