Another hilarious piece of randomness by =KimRaiFan with "Fly, Toilet, Fly..."
The emote has a very funny expression, I like the way it looks with the mouth going over the eyes and the bulging eyes. It's the exact expression I would use in this situation. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="" title="I am a dummy!" /> And the poor guy is clinging to the toilet for dear life. The expression is just perfect for this work.
The toilet itself looks pretty detailed, especially with the shading. The shaking is a very nice touch to this, adds the feeling of it being airborne zooming at high speeds.
The fire could use a bit more colour to it, it seems to only have two. Despite that, the animation for the fire is very smooth and looks amazing.
All in all, this emote is amazing. The expression, the idea, the animation, everything. Very nice work here.
I hope this is a good critique, it is my first one. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="16" alt="" title="Blush" />
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