Stress is a good thing to have when they do start making out, but you don't want to hold it off till the end. (It also makes for a really attractive romantic scene as well.) The end is when people get antsy. You definatly don't put it anywhere in between the second to third chapter, it has to be in the first chapter if you can make it go in there other wise it's too long and people won't read it.
There are lots and lots of people out there like I who won't read a fan fiction unless it has a little somethin' somethin' in the begining, but if you make the scene sound good enough and put pelnty of detail in it along with the rest of your story we'll be more then willing to stick with your story and keep reading till the end. You've got to fool us into thinking something more might happen later on in that chapter.
As for Junjo Romatica, it's a good starter, but I've grown past that. It's so hard to find good stories these days. I usually have to write my own, though the only ones I have posted on here are really creepy stupid stuff I wrote as a joke.
If you ever need some help I'm sure that I or some other people could help you out. I'm not exactly new to writing. I'm surprised by how much my skills have grown in four years... my spelling sucks, but I can put together a pretty good story or help with a small scene if you need it.
Well I wish you luck. Don't forget to post the link when you get more of it done, I want to read it.
Yeah, she showed/taught me a lot of stuff she wasn't suppose to when I was young... I guess you could say I had a pretty messed up childhood and because of it, and since my sense of humor was all sex jokes and violence at the age of 6 or something I couldn't make a actual friend till about 4th to 5th grade, I mean I had one friend but me and her were lucky if we ever had classes together... Actually I still have a sick sense of humor, but I hide it from people for the most part. I was a messed up kid though... very vilolent... I taught kids the same stuff my sister taught me... not good, not good at all... And she taught me wrong, she made it seem like when a man and a woman entered a room together they couldn't help but have sex. >_>;
I guess I'm lucky, but I don't know if I was or not... I mean I guess I know more titles than most 16 year olds my age. They're all Junjou Romantica and all that, and I'm like, "Give me something I haven't read... It's kind of over done... "
I see what you mean. I cant' remember my chilhood, so I cannot compare. I had friend's until the 8th grade XD I Actually am quite selfish when it comes to yaoi: I only care about my own yaoi or my own pairings, so I'm not that much into series or anime (it´s boring to me) Also, I don't believe in man x woman sex, haha; only man x man. You could say that gay love it's the "normal" for me. If I see something that has to do with male and female stuff, i go like: Ewww, a guy and a girl
I'm a very balanced person when it comes to my feelings, it's like if I didn't have any.
That's not good. I remember everything about my childhood. I freakin' loved it. Heck, I played all the fun videogames as a young girl. Zelda was my first game other than Pokemon, god how I loved my N64, I STILL play it to this day. <3
Actually, we're a lot alike. I don't really like yaois much anymore really because they get too cheesy or something... They're either poorly written or something else. I like my own pairings, and certain character pairings... (Boring to me too.)
Oh yeah; I know what you are talking about. Back in my story, I have a Vampire OC, but since all that Twilight thing appeared it's been hard to make vampires look as mysterious and interesting as before
I felt like you when Avatar-the last airbender- (the cartoon) came out. In my story some people can control the elements, such as fire, wind and water... but now that that cartoon was in the TV, I feel my story ended up being a copy, even though I made mine first.