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Guys, I need help; You know my fic gayboylovehouse.livejournal.co… when do you think Link and Pipit should make out? XD -stupid question TvT- 

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5 deviants said Just once until the end
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3 deviants said Chapter 2, already XD
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3 deviants said Until chapter 3
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3 deviants said Other
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No deviants said After chapter 5

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HeltFelaktig Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
Stress is a good thing to have when they do start making out, but you don't want to hold it off till the end. (It also makes for a really attractive romantic scene as well.) The end is when people get antsy. You definatly don't put it anywhere in between the second to third chapter, it has to be in the first chapter if you can make it go in there other wise it's too long and people won't read it.

There are lots and lots of people out there like I who won't read a fan fiction unless it has a little somethin' somethin' in the begining, but if you make the scene sound good enough and put pelnty of detail in it along with the rest of your story we'll be more then willing to stick with your story and keep reading till the end. You've got to fool us into thinking something more might happen later on in that chapter.

As for Junjo Romatica, it's a good starter, but I've grown past that. It's so hard to find good stories these days. I usually have to write my own, though the only ones I have posted on here are really creepy stupid stuff I wrote as a joke.

If you ever need some help I'm sure that I or some other people could help you out. I'm not exactly new to writing. I'm surprised by how much my skills have grown in four years... my spelling sucks, but I can put together a pretty good story or help with a small scene if you need it.

Well I wish you luck. Don't forget to post the link when you get more of it done, I want to read it.
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, don't worry. I have studied to be a writer and I have done some profesional works. Also, I have seen yaoi since I was 11 XD and I'm 18 now.

The reason I asked this was because I wanted to write something my readers felt comfortable with :D

And thanks for your support!Thanks to what you said, I think I can carry on with a good job :aww:
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HeltFelaktig Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Ah, I've been into yaoi since I was very young as well, for me it's been since I was 8 or so. I still remember my sister bringing home Gravitation putting it in the PS2 for us to watch.

I see you posted your story. I guess I'll have to read it. :D
I'm excited to see how it turns out.
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, since you were 8?? :wow:
You are lucky! XD
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HeltFelaktig Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Yeah, she showed/taught me a lot of stuff she wasn't suppose to when I was young... I guess you could say I had a pretty messed up childhood and because of it, and since my sense of humor was all sex jokes and violence at the age of 6 or something I couldn't make a actual friend till about 4th to 5th grade, I mean I had one friend but me and her were lucky if we ever had classes together... Actually I still have a sick sense of humor, but I hide it from people for the most part.
I was a messed up kid though... very vilolent... I taught kids the same stuff my sister taught me... not good, not good at all... And she taught me wrong, she made it seem like when a man and a woman entered a room together they couldn't help but have sex. >_>;

I guess I'm lucky, but I don't know if I was or not... I mean I guess I know more titles than most 16 year olds my age. They're all Junjou Romantica and all that, and I'm like, "Give me something I haven't read... It's kind of over done... "
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see what you mean.
I cant' remember my chilhood, so I cannot compare. I had friend's until the 8th grade XD
I Actually am quite selfish when it comes to yaoi: I only care about my own yaoi or my own pairings, so I'm not that much into series or anime (it´s boring to me)
Also, I don't believe in man x woman sex, haha; only man x man. You could say that gay love it's the "normal" for me. If I see something that has to do with male and female stuff, i go like: Ewww, a guy and a girl:iconimhorrifiedplz:

I'm a very balanced person when it comes to my feelings, it's like if I didn't have any.
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HeltFelaktig Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
That's not good. I remember everything about my childhood. I freakin' loved it. Heck, I played all the fun videogames as a young girl. Zelda was my first game other than Pokemon, god how I loved my N64, I STILL play it to this day. <3

Actually, we're a lot alike. I don't really like yaois much anymore really because they get too cheesy or something... They're either poorly written or something else. I like my own pairings, and certain character pairings... (Boring to me too.)

Hmm... okay then, everyone feels diffrently.
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, the only thing I can recall from my childhood has to do with Zelda games and Link... that's pretty much it.
I also still love and play my 64 :)
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LiveLongButLOL Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
pleas not at the end!
I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG!
in chapter 2 or 3 =D
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NeonKitsune16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what makes a great make out session is when the character is under the worst of stress
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So, you think it would be nice of they did it after some kind of fight?
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NeonKitsune16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah i read soo much yoai junjo romatica is my favorite ^^ and i write my own but the vampire reputation is kinda ruined now so im sad
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah; I know what you are talking about. Back in my story, I have a Vampire OC, but since all that Twilight thing appeared it's been hard to make vampires look as mysterious and interesting as before :(
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NeonKitsune16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah agh i hate it they ruin the legends of vampires and werwolves my yoai before that twilight crap came out was call my lover is a vampire and i worked so hard on it
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I felt like you when Avatar-the last airbender- (the cartoon) came out. In my story some people can control the elements, such as fire, wind and water... but now that that cartoon was in the TV, I feel my story ended up being a copy, even though I made mine first.
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NeonKitsune16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah i hate it soo much we work hard and then its taken away
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