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Scattered Heart Chain- Chapter 13 by Kim-SukLey Scattered Heart Chain- Chapter 13 by Kim-SukLey
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Plot:
Putting others before ourselves can result in forgetting who we are. Link has been a living example of this. In this chapter, he finally lets go of those things that hold him back as a person to break through and continue in his journey.

Author's note:

1- Since now I am working with a more professional format, I am uploading PDF files which respect the original book-like editing. If you  are unable to load a PDF version, a link to an online reading is available, however, it lacks features from the original (simply because they are not supported).

2- The original reviser of SHC, Andytamama95 has recently joined the Navy, so Thunderboltmanor will cover up for him until he's ready to pick up on duty.


Finally, I hope you enjoy :aww:
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Charlie-Chaos Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2018  Professional Artist
No! Engi is so mean! My inner Ravio wants to eat his soul now. Good thing your Ravio is more level!
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Charlie-Chaos Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2018  Professional Artist
I am able to read this on my computer! Yay!!!

I feel so bad for Albi! Getting used to eating after a while of not doing so is so hard and it feels like your heart is going to explode, poor Albi! He needs much more bunny love all the time 
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DevilLadLover1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
I have an image in my head as well for albi in his wheel chair and such and if you find yourself I don't know not knowing what to draw, though I know you are very busy, maybe you could make a little doodle of what it would look like? 
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DevilLadLover1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Thanks to Andytamama95 for serving his country ^^ Anyway, I had started to read chapter 14 before this before I realized I skipped it oh goodness was I confused... I love this chapter it has so much content to it revealing a crazy amount of information. I think it's very strange that Twilight is erm, attracted to younger people, but it doesn't exactly seem that odd for the way you portray him.  I had no idea how to take in that information honestly but tbh Time basically gave a positive look on it. Technically it really isn't his fault it's basically like being a sexuality you can't prevent it I suppose but as time said he doesn't act upon his feelings and it's kind of like how people with suicidal thoughts or bad thoughts don't act upon them either (hopefully they do not seeing as if they did it wouldn't be good.) my example being that even though the can't prevent the thoughts they prevent the actions. Albi being "a working man" is sort of shocking but I find it interesting that it is given as a fact for him, it also seems very reasonable for him to doso. I didn't know albi didn't know about ravio but now I do and i love ravio's confession it made me so happy to be honest. I love the two together and I hope albi plans to stay with ravio. Going to go read chapter fourteen now, expect more long  comments >_<
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KatelScout47 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this chapter! Just wondering (I know you're very VERY busy and all) but would you be able to draw Windy with his massive crawfish? I'd love to see it. I can just imagine him..:3
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Ghirashe Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Awesome chapter!
You know, before this chapter I really hated Shadow for what he had done, and now I'm like "Shadow, come here so I can hug you, you poor thing!"
And I never expected Albi would do something like that, it's so sad :(


Oh, and I loved that narcissism joke from Lieb :D (Big Grin) 
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michiyune10 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
loveee this story!! can't wait for the next chapter !!!
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wijacoo Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
This was very good! I hope you don't mind me asking, but maybe you could draw Twi before and after the thirty-day recovery, just to see his build, if possible, only in his leggings.
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That actually sounds like a good idea!
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wijacoo Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Yeah, because I have an idea he's probably very good looking with his muscular physique, enough that he can hold Time in his arms and easily do a 200 m sprint.
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Nimine54 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Jesus, I did not expect Albi to be a... prostitute. Especially considering the fact that he's only a few years older than me. It's a little heartbreaking. 
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Link-Zelda-lover Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, slowly each character is learning and changing for the better. We are connecting more with each Link learning their stories as we read on. Truly wonderful, I enjoy your story and I always look forward to it.
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KittyCat4101 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 13, 2014
This is an amazing story :) great job!! :)
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Kim-SukLey Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm happy it's developing well!
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KittyCat4101 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
You're very welcome Clap :happybounce: 
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Foyet-of-Hyrule Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Poor Twi! I have a friend with the same sort of attraction, and even though she would never do anything to harm a kid, it's hard to live with. I'm glad that Time is so understanding, being ostracized because of that is the last thing that Twi probably needs :)
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Zeliga Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just faved this, even I've only read one chapter so far .____. Damn my lack of time >8c
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Thunderboltmanor Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just want to hug everyone in the story.  Except Ghirahim.  He's mean. 
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