I read your past work Phineas and Ferb: The Seer fan fiction series and I must say it was a marvelous work. Despite that series once facing a complication (I remembered it being something about a court possibly out of copyright issues), Phineas and Ferb: The Seer never cease to amaze me. In fact, thanks to your wonderful story, I developed a passion for fantasy stories and games such as Diablo series, Dark Souls series, and Dungeons and Dragons. It's funny that I gained such passion from a fanfic based on Phineas and Ferb series, yet the fanfic of yours, The Seer, stands out from ones I ever read for that reason. It's cool, funny, and full of emotion.
Perhaps because of the same passion, I tend to compare Dark Sorcerer (the bad guy of The Seer) with villains from my favorite fantasy franchises such as Malthael from Diablo 3: Reaper of Souls and Master Org from Power Rangers Wild Force. My favorite minions of his are warlocks, whom description I found a bit amusing due to sounds somewhat similar to Nazgul (unlike them though, Warlocks are numerous and can be killed!) and give off Grim Reaper vibe thanks to their hooded robes. Perhaps because of the latter reason, I personally felt that warlocks would be pretty much badass should their Scepter of Deception has a gimmick in form of the ability to form scythe-like blade out of black magic to reinforce that vibe.
Anyway, great work, Ashley. And thank you.