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MARVEL Agent Phil Coulson Stamp by TwilightProwler Kthxbai by Ishdakitty
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Badly Written Fanfiction by World-Hero21 Ravenclaw Stamp by Softijshamster Daughter of Athena by Alaenakins

Hello, I'm Sarah or Keamy...and this is my DA. I don't check it much anymore. :3 Can find me on tumblr mrsdorn or daughter-of-the-horde

Current Residence: Icecrown, Northrend

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Favorite genre of music: Pop, Country, Classical, Rock...old old Rock.

Favorite cartoon character: Scooby Doo

Personal Quote: I have a secret weapon which no Astares can withstand!... PMS! ;)

Favourite Visual Artist
Noldofinve, Vividwings and The-evil-legacy are my favorite DA Artists :)
Favourite Movies
LOTR, Harry Potter, Gladiator, Pacific Rim and Courageous.
Favourite TV Shows
Once Upon a Time and Star Wars the Clone Wars (But I lost tv that let me see it in the 2nd season.)
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Linkin park, Lady Gaga, Taylor Swift, Nightwish.
Favourite Books
Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, Horus Rising, Thousand Sons, Fulgrim, The First Heretic.
Favourite Writers
JRRT, JK Rowling, Dan Abnett, Graham Mcneill, Aaron Dembski-Bowden.
Favourite Games
King's Quest, D3 and SWTOR.
Favourite Gaming Platform
Computer
Tools of the Trade
Camera and Wordpad
Other Interests
Writing, Gaming, Traveling and well Reading of course!

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A very interesting peace, typically pieces like this I look at and write off as some ones "ramble" this is clearly not a ramble.

The writer gives his reader a true feeling for his point; the hypocrisy of the world, in a very clear strong way. The beginning is great for showing the lies and truth in a comparison and contrast of the things we see daily and then the interesting effect of the writer actually admitting he is also guilty of hypocrisy.

There where some aspects I disliked but as those were on a personal level I will leave them out. Over all a great peace, personally it was filled with emotion and it really makes me personally think.
Although I do attend church in a meeting house I really think meeting in a house would probably be more productive as I would learn more from studying the scriptures with a closer group as apposed to those in church determined there way is the only way to read something. :)
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A well written piece, the first feeling is that it will be about church meetings in house. But then it takes on more of a plot involving how each of the people attending the service are wear different shoes and how (strangle enough) those shoes describe something about them and their life.

It described characters from all walks of life coming together for a Sunday church and what all they where able to contribute to the service it was very interesting.

Personally I believe it would be even more amazing if this was non-fiction instead of fiction. But still it is a very well written piece.
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A well written story, (the second if I'm not mistaken) following newly elected congresswomen Tseng. The first story left me thinking "Oh this is some good chick trying to help out the criminally insane" End of this story I know she has some darker plans in mind power as much as she can get.
I loved how this felt like a politician was really talking the description of her background everything sounded like I was hearing it on TV/radio excellent work.
I look forward to seeing more of this story, especially since there are so many good ways this story can be taken.
I did intend the ' around Fulgrim's name to show he had the demon possessing him the transfer.
And thank you for the critique.
I will try to remember this stuff as I write in the future. :)