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Time Slips through my hands like sand
Precious sand that at times I'll admit I've tried to throw away
Wishing for it to go faster to be farther along
Now as it trickles past I wonder if I really should have
Wished it all away...
How will you spend ur sand?
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ZexyPineCones Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
A beautiful thought...one must be careful what they wish for. :)
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sam-the-drawing-fox Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
nice :3
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NekoChanTheKitty Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Short but sweet. Really makes you think. Good job!
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Shinobi-Gambu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Student General Artist
Real nicely done poem here :aww: Now I can see the time on sands
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