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The vespers peal
The time has come
for sleep

The vespers peal
The reaper here
shall reap

The vespers peal
To call for the
black sheep

The vespers peal
And He intends
to keep

Let ring,
Let ring,
O! let ring

Let ring,
Let ring,
For He intends
to keep

Let ring,
Let ring,
O! let ring

Let ring,
Let ring,
For He intends
to keep

The vespers peal
The waters here
are deep

The vespers peal
Our sins in it
shall steep

The vespers peal
The guilty there
shall weep

The vespers peal
And He intends
to keep

Let ring,
Let ring,
O! let ring

Let ring,
Let ring,
For He intends
to keep

Let ring,
Let ring,
O! let ring

Let ring,
Let ring,
For He intends
to keep
A personal song.
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Danielagor Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2006
I definetly like it. Two thumbs...no...THREE thumbs up.
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japanther Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2006
VESPERTINE!
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Zarafa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2006   Photographer
Very clever poem. You are very talented :clap:
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korowiow-agrest Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2006   Writer
It's a great poem, I like its rhyming and rhythm - and repetitions, as Nimril said already :). Not mentioning the general feeling.
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Nimril Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2006
I really like it. repetition is awesome if used correctly. if I may ask, what was the muse for this poem?
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