LOVE this! This is an AWESOME hybridization of the classic enterprise and the NX era enterprise!
Needless to say Andrew Probert's Enterprise played a big inspiration to this and the original concept. Though I had little to no trouble with Ryan Church's concept, this version would have worked just as well. Especially if there were a viewport on deck 2 or 3 where the bridge can be placed.
Glad I could inspire you,
Much better. ^^