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Pokemon CBC Intro by KelpGull Pokemon CBC Intro by KelpGull
My intro comic for :iconpcbc:.

THERE IS SO MUCH WRONG WITH THIS.
I didn't even have time to think about what I was doing, let alone fix everything :(
She's off model constantly, my color pallette could use adjustment, my backgrounds are rudimentary, there are inking mistakes.
I wasn't going to add backgrounds, but for some reason the prospect of leaving the empty space white depressed me, so I booked it ;P
Love it or hate it, Sneasel is the same color as her hair :) It just went so well with their history, I kind of wanted him to look like a hair extension, sitting back there in her hood XD Which happened organically by the way. I looked at her hood in that first panel, and I was like, 'You know what would fit in there?!'

But anyways, I like it. And I'm amazed I finished in time, with all of the other college projects I have going on.

This makes more sense if you know her character. I actually keep thinking this is a parody of myself counting all of my current obligations, and taking on a new one anyways. There goes my subconscious mind, making fun of me again.
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Gato-Thy-Neko Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2008
Ahhh, Wolfeh, this is amazing.
I looove Sneasel in the back of her hood and ahh, moving whenever she did, panels 4-7 are SO much fun to look at.
I love how you had her counting her fingers and then staring down. :D Showing action from panel to panel looks REALLY good <3
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaah, thank you <3 Panels 4-7 are definitely what I like most about this :D I'm glad you noticed Sneasel following her movement! I loved sticking that in XD
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Antilamonn Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Simple, yet brilliant! I like it a lot :heart:.
Personnaly I think the " hair extention" is a well-thought idea (:.
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D
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FatalityFold Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
Aww I think it's cute!
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thanks ^^
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ThirdPotato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I LOVE your expressions and those panels are really fun. Also a great color palette. I especialy like the shape of panel 2; Really fun stuff! I can't wait to see more!
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! Expressions are funnn :)
I liked panel two as well, it came out pretty interesting.
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izolas Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
This is pretty awesome.

The only thing I'd really critique, this being an awesome rush job, is the thumb in panel 6. Or maybe my hand is limited in the skill department xD

I still like your handwritingggg
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
No, you're right, the thumb in panel six is a little off. The thumbs in panels one and five are much worse, though XD
Thank you! :)
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PineappleSodaCat Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
I love how she's just "Yeah, ok."

And YOU went off model? Did you see my finished comic? Your character looks fine. XD
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KelpGull Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha, thanks XD
I love the way she looks in the seventh panel, I think I'm going to try to keep her face looking like that, haha.
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