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Alien Alfredo by KelpGull Alien Alfredo by KelpGull
A Polaroid I drew up for a Facebook stunt I engineered.
Good times :)

That's me on the left. I think I captured myself pretty well, ha.
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PineappleSodaCat Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
Dang. I keep forgetting that you shaved your head a while back. And I too will have to check out this facebook group.

I like the scaley/shaded effect. :D

Crrrrrrits:

Alien guy's lower stomach doesn't seem to line up with the rest of him.

Torso too long? Hard to tell here. XD

The hair coming out of the gun should overlap with the outline to make it seem less flat.

Your outlines are wobbly? I dunno what program you outlined in, so I can't give you advice here. Usually the best thing is to do lines one stroke at a time instead of going the whole outline at once. This remains true with a mouse, though you should go over some of your lines again to smooth them out.

Oh! The shading on the fleshy-colored areas isn't as contrasty as other things in the picture. That should be darker there.
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izolas Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
It totally looks like you. I saw that and thought 'yeah that's definitely Erika." I need to figure out what this facebook stunt you speak of is, though.
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KelpGull Featured By Owner May 16, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha.
It's in the "I should have been a space pirate," group.
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izolas Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
I'll haveta check that out later.
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