And if you look to your left, you'll see a huge experiment on properly making dust!
Good thing that awkward flag is on the left too--it doesn't look exactly right. Folding can be a nightmare.
The booth immediately behind the armored warrior is usually where you'd see the brass, emperors, etc. of any kingdom or empire. Unless the major personalities of the book itself do not specifically involve someone who may be sitting up there, watching the spectacle, you may consider a second version of this picture where the booth is not only at the side of the warrior's back, but a major ruling figure is also visible for the reader.
Then again, it's great as is; the emphasis on the right to afford space for text is well done.
lucky u able to get so many commision!~i like this piece,it is one of my fav theme~though i tink that the contrast and darker shadows is absent,but maybe u aimed fot his effect,i dunno~ GJ anyway~seeya~