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OC-tober Day 11: Siblings by Keilanify OC-tober Day 11: Siblings by Keilanify
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dango117 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2017  Student Artist
ok will do!Bendy And The Ink Machine - Bendy Jig 


for the positives first!
eye structure, expiramentaton with body poses and styles of cloths i love people trying out! its important after all exression a person!


now for the improvements
BatIM Ch 3 Trailer - Bendy Hiding Behind Tombstone 

the hands are a bit paw like which dont know if intentional or not and something im still working on even as a collage student. recomment looking and drawing hands after hands. this will aid you for the long run. trust me.

then feet are as well alittle funny to me but not sure if thats ntentional or not but just wanted to point that out BatIM Ch 3 Trailer - Bendy Meets a Figure 

as for backround i do wish to discribe the kids a bit wish there was since its another form of story telling of aid character. it makes it look like there not just posing in space ( and am guilty of this) you can take pictures of different back grounds as prefences and just tweak it.its a pain but worth it later on in that sense. 
 
last is just noticed in terms of inking though notice you did do some shading( good job! ) areas such as the hat  and under the bangs there isnt any*shrugs* 

BatIM Ch 3 Trailer - Walking Bendy 

anyways over all though do love the concept of the siblings there is some tiny little improvements needed to make future pieces or just this piece out of this world. sure, today constructive critic maybe seen as negitive and came from a place where i as super sensitive of it in beginning of college but really needed. i hope me saying this stuff helps you and lets you contienue drawing! it doesnt happen overnight after all! hope you have a great day!

BatIM Ch 3 Trailer - Laughing Bendy #2  
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dango117 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Student Artist
is it ok to give constructive critic *( college art student) if you dont want to i completely understand and its just to improve is all. not to make fun or anything in that nature.
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Keilanify Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Go for it dude
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dango117 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2017  Student Artist
thank you ^^ i will try my best!BatIM - 'No' Bendy 
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