All the details in the clouds... it takes my breath away. Sure, the focus may not be on that, but i love how it was done. How you were able to make it look dark to light, and all the colors in between to give it a sort of majestic feel. On top of that, it looks like a storm is just clearing up. Really, a good job indeed.
The figures are also well done. It seems as though a tone of detail when into them, figuring the shading and the proportions. You really get a feel for what the girl is thinking, seeing the other figure in the distance. While the figure gives off a mysterious feel to it.
I love it! Keep it up, it's always nice to see these kinds of pictures from you.