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{ Commission } Carry On -- Animation!

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I am not sure at ALL how I made it do this.. But please critique!

Horse : :iconcolourize-stock: [link]
Field : :iconsleepwalker-stock: [link]
Sky : :iconyouwatchmebleed: [link]
Grass Brush : :iconcharfade: [link]
Necklace Brush : :iconlusciousskittles: [link]
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Some things I noticed:

1. The whole thing itself is very saturated, and pixelated, I'm not sure why it is like that, and it may just be from uploading it to Deviantart.
2. The horse looks squished together sidewards, making it look unproportional to the horse's height in general.
3. The mane isn't really flowing, and is flat against the horse's neck, while in reality, when a horse is cantering/galloping the mane is flying up in the air. The tail is better, but I would make the ends curl or something to that sort. c:
4. The horse is cut out super straight, and you could blur the edges of the horse's body to help make it look more realistic.


Overall, I love how you did the highlights in the mane and tail, and the idea in general, but it can be improved. Hope this helped. xD Please don't take it meanly, I am just saying my opinion on it. o-o *not trying to be mean*
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Thanks! I Actually, the original mane was kinda laying on the horse, so I just kinda drew over it :P And I had a hard time on this one with the size so that's why xD and, I guess animating and uploading to Da ruined all the originality :( Thanks for the help!

(Sorry for such late reply)
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That makes sense. xD Deviantart doesn't agree with some images and animations ruining the original version sometimes for some reason. :p No problem. c:
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Yea.. xD Turns out actually the orderer or the layout said they didn't want it o.e
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I hate when people do that o.e If they order it, they should at least pay you for making it even if they aren't going to use it.
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Yea.. But when I work this hard on something, I was expecting for her to be like "wow, its so pretty" Or something xD But NO I didnt get a msg close to that xD
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Haha. xD She could have at least been nice about it. :p Whenever I order from someone, even if I don't really like it, I always say thanks and that they did a good job. xD Some people are just rude when it comes to ordering something and it not being exactly what they pictured :P
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Ikr ;P I also hate when someone gives you an order and it is just like one of Erratic's or somebody's :c Like people have no originality o.e But then again I don't like orders like : a Rainbow zebra with rainbow hair and wings...
Those kinda ideas are just dumb :3
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