Kayzig

First of all, I think it would be awesome if you started uploading some linework / sketches /rougher work. Your painted style is awesome, but sometimes there are technical flaws under the colors - no matter how nicely someone paints/shades, if the shape of the drawing beneath it makes no sense, then it's just awkward.

The lines on her neck imply that her head is facing the viewer head-on, but it is in fact turned to the side. The muscles that cause the \ / lines going up the throat actually start at the clavicle, I believe, and attach behind the edges of the jaw, below the ear. The muscle on our right looks like it does, but on the left, it looks like it goes into the middle of her jaw.

The bands on her arm should not be that high up - if they are armlets and not a part of a shirt hem, anyway, If they're a part of the shirt hem then they should line up with the parts of it we can see under the vest. Her right arm (our left) also seems a bit off - it tapers in just under the deltoid a bit too far, in my opinion.

The last issue is with the eye farthest from the viewer - it bulges out of her actual skull; the eyelids go OVER the eye. Unless you are going for a cartoonier style than I thought, and even if that is the case, it just doesn't mix well with the rest of the picture. It seems to perpetuate the illusion that her eyes are a bit too far apart.

Even with the slightly off eye, it's another lovely lady you've drawn for us, and I am glad to see you are still drawing! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="29" height="21" alt="" title="Dance! - "/> Never be afraid to upload in-between pictures; heck, look at all the silly pencil sketches and rough concept art I upload, lately. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod - "/>

I don't think I've thought about joining this since dropping out...gosh, maybe in 2016? But I'm pretty well settled and looking for a project...maybe I can narrow down a character and throw my hat in the...wait, no, you throw something into a HAT. 

I'll be thinking about this tomorrow! XD

Ho ho, oh try and stop me from toppling the master of that dark place and ruling it as my own!

I totally remember having the top-middle guy in my collection of mismatched toys 8D