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Hello ~ I'd like to begin by saying that this piece is really striking! I love the texture of the lines, especially in the fur. There i...


To begin, I want to say that your style really shows in this piece! The expressions have a lot of impact, and the poses aid them and th...

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Hello ~

I'd like to begin by saying that this piece is really striking! I love the texture of the lines, especially in the fur. There is a perfect mix of lights and shadows, making it stand out more. The blank background is actually very good for this type of piece, as it leaves the subject to be the center of attention.

The pose is interesting, but for the InkTober theme of "Furious", I don't seem to quite get that vibe from this picture. Don't get me wrong, the creature looks very intimidating and "sinful" as the title entails, but the pose is more commanding than furious.
The long neck and straight pose might be what is throwing me for a loop here. "Furious" is such a visceral word, and evokes a feeling of terror and rage. For a devilish character like this, a threatening pose similar to an aggressive wolf might do the trick. The portrait layout of this picture doesn't help convey the vision as much as it could.

Regardless, the style of lineart, coloring, and shading is phenomenal. I get a manga vibe from the detailed color-blocking and scratchy lines. Very nice touch!
While I see many artists using goat horns and canines to represent a sinful being, the way you drew it was unique and more true to the theme. With some of the strands of fur appearing like veins (like the bottom white streak near the center), it adds to the feeling of rage or fury. I am also obsessed with the horns! They look so clean and sharp, and they really add to the vision of the piece.

Overall, I love the way you constructed this picture, but there could be some improvements if redone in the future. I really enjoy the concept and how you handled it, regardless <3

Keep it up, you're doing great :)
so tired~~~~@#$%#
i'm exhausted beyond belief, yet I did basically nothing;;;
i want to sleep forever

sorry for not posting often Grump 

made in MS Paint
time taken = about 30 minutes
character = random design I made up on the spot
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To begin, I want to say that your style really shows in this piece! The expressions have a lot of impact, and the poses aid them and the vision well.
I also enjoy how you decided to line this piece. The thin lines on the outer silhouette bring out the shapes and form of the characters.

However, I noticed a few things that created dissonance in the lines and shapes. I think that adding more black lines to the small ribbon attached to the character's armor on her right arm would define the shape more. I was briefly confused as to what it was when I first looked at it.
I also believe that adding more detail with the black liner on the stone pedestal will help define the lights and shadows better. Using pencil shading could also work. It appears rather flat in comparison to the rest of the piece.

Overall, I love the amount of life these characters possess! The expressions and poses really seal the deal. Also, I love the way you added the background "swirls" (I don't know how else to describe them lol) to help fill in the background. Adds more texture to the piece. Honestly, the scratchy coloring with pencil is a nice touch. It shows how organic the piece is.

Keep up the good work! <3
painting practice
I love rocky beaches, so I tried to paint one. The values are trash but I had fun, so its fine.
The brushes don't get enough love, so I used them almost exclusively here.
The sky was the most frustrating part; so I rushed it :( (Sad) 

Made with: MS Paint
Time taken: roughly 9 hours (not straight, of course lol)
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old ACNL doodle
An old picture I drew of my character in ACNL
I made this in January, if I remember correctly
Still experimenting w/ Paint and types of shading. So much fun <3


Made with: MS Paint
Character: Mittenz (Animal Crossing: New Leaf)
Time Taken: about an hour and 20 minutes
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Hey again!
More basic stuff to say about myself :)

The Most Basic of the Basic:
Favorite color - Wine red, dark green, or navy blue (literally cannot choose between them)
Favorite art medium - Colored pencil
Favorite season - Fall/Autumn
Favorite Weather Conditions - Moderately sunny, little/no breeze, 63 degrees Fahrenheit
Favorite time of day - Morning/Evening
Artist/s I am Most Inspired by - RossDraws / Kienan Lafferty
Favorite Animal - Cat (specifically Russian Blues <3)
Favorite Music Genre - Lofi (hiphop, R&B, etc...)
Favorite Food - Rice
Favorite Drink - Coffee (2 tablespoons sugar and lots of milk because my taste buds are equivalent to a toddler's)
Favorite Scents - Lilac, Lavender, Pine

Zodiac and Personality Stuff I Don't Care For:
Western Zodiac (Sun, Ascendant, Moon): Virgo, Virgo, Gemini
Chinese Zodiac: Horse
Myers-Briggs: INFJ (Turbulent)

What to Know about my Art:
- I have yet to solidify my art style
- I have a million OCs and you cannot stop me from making more
- I experiment and study as much as I can
- No, I am not trying to copy the "anime" art style, though I do enjoy certain elements and may implement them into my art
- I am always searching for critique, so please comment criticism whenever you have the chance <3

Links to my Other Accounts:
* yes, I did have a different D.A. account. I abandoned it due to not being proud of it.
DeviantArt -
lakecloudthekitty.deviantart.c…
username: LakecloudTheKitty

Paintberri.com -
* I'll occasionally use this website's art program to draw, but I still mainly use MS Paint and OpenCanvas. I will most likely stop posting there, also.
paintberri.com/artist/kawaiimi…
username: kawaiimittenz

I'd say that that's about it! At least, from what I can think of. Feel free to ask me stuff.
Have a great day/morning/evening <3

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