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Outer Ego
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She's flawless
Utterly beautiful
Without a doubt , drop dead gorgeous
From her carmel-colored skin
To her lighten brown locks
And grey pupils .
She has the gift to light up the room with just one smile
But yet she doesn't even try.
Her breath reeks of cinnamon
Her voice , soft yet firm
Her beauty is that of a goddess
Her grace,somewhat of a giselle
She's perfect and she doesn't even care.
I hate her
Im jealous
she is everything I will Never be
She is everything I dreamt of , but never got
When I look at her , I cry
Because I know she will cause me nothing but pain.
I curse the ground she walks on
But yet I follow her everywhere she goes
Like a magnet , She pulls me
And yet I so happily follow .
She's a drug and a powerfull one at that
Im hooked
Been hooked for 14 years now.
I try to runaway
But she drags me back
Scolding me for ever thinking I can just leave.
But I still love her
She's family,
She's blood,
She held me when I needed to be hold.
She is me
I am her
Bonded by skin
Ken by blood
When I look in the mirror I see her
She's more than my hopes and dreams
She's my outer ego.
Utterly beautiful
Without a doubt , drop dead gorgeous
From her carmel-colored skin
To her lighten brown locks
And grey pupils .
She has the gift to light up the room with just one smile
But yet she doesn't even try.
Her breath reeks of cinnamon
Her voice , soft yet firm
Her beauty is that of a goddess
Her grace,somewhat of a giselle
She's perfect and she doesn't even care.
I hate her
Im jealous
she is everything I will Never be
She is everything I dreamt of , but never got
When I look at her , I cry
Because I know she will cause me nothing but pain.
I curse the ground she walks on
But yet I follow her everywhere she goes
Like a magnet , She pulls me
And yet I so happily follow .
She's a drug and a powerfull one at that
Im hooked
Been hooked for 14 years now.
I try to runaway
But she drags me back
Scolding me for ever thinking I can just leave.
But I still love her
She's family,
She's blood,
She held me when I needed to be hold.
She is me
I am her
Bonded by skin
Ken by blood
When I look in the mirror I see her
She's more than my hopes and dreams
She's my outer ego.
This whole poem is not me at all , I mean I did write it but I didnt write it for myself I wrote this for a friend who always said she had a outer ego who she hated and I thought that was like really cool , so I wrote this Um this is my first time Im not really a writer so dont like jump on me or anything !!!!!
Love,
Kawaii Pirate
EDIT: so um me and a few other people notice I had alot of spelling mistakes so I ran threw them and put the right spelling
thank you
Love,
Kawaii Pirate
EDIT: so um me and a few other people notice I had alot of spelling mistakes so I ran threw them and put the right spelling
thank you
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reminds me of the manga series, Black God (Kurokami). it's also about "the other self", but in a slightly different way. haha i'm not sure if it's relevant though, i make links between completely unrelated things most of the time xD
nevertheless, nice work composing this
nevertheless, nice work composing this