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Camryn Victoria

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Camryn Victoria
Image size
3184x2296px 3.34 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSLR-A350
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/20.0
Focal Length
75 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 19, 2008, 6:18:46 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

it is a pretty portrait also very pretty model, nice make-up clean and simple it dosen't (i don't know if i'm going to say this right) ...make her face heavy? i suppose i'm not sure.

There are just a couple of things i would like to comment on. Fist of all the awkward position of her neck makes it look tense? i think would be the right word even though the models face is (what i would call) relaxed. Second, the light hitting her face is a little bit to bright in contrast to the other side of her face which is to dark. In my opinion the light is to bright because though it does iluminate the eye very well it covers up (if thats even the right word) the crease of her nose. (do you know what i mean?) Also, the eye on her right side didn't catch the light so you see you have one really bright side and a not bright enough side.
Aside from that you did a splended job the picture is crisp and beautiful her hair is very pretty and i like the way her lips are parted slightly. I hope this helps. If you have any questions please feel free to ask me
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