i love this story! Your take on the relationship between the "crewmate" and the parasite is cool and the mix of first person and second person point of view is perfect for this! i wish the pacing was a little slower (i may have noticed this just because that's something i struggle with myself), but overall Your writing is great!
The Impostor's revenge.
Great art: nice lighting, the parasite poking through the suit is cool, and the Post-It note on the cracked visor is a neat touch. And the dialogue is haunting.
This would make for a cool story.
I'm not not saying she was ejected because of the pride merch on her suit (which I totally don't absolutely love as a minor detail on a piece that otherwise focuses on other topics, thus normalizing those kinds of details)
but if I were saying that, I also wouldn't not say the crew was asking for it.