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symbiote12345 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2018  Hobbyist
Looks epic.
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Undyeboi225 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018
How did i read all of this even though im like 2 years late :/
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Highwire554 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I LOVE YOUR STORY AND I HOPE U CONTINUE WORKING ON IT
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Plikkar Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2017
Hello ^^ can i translate this to Hungarian ? <3 i will leave the sources <3
btw i rly love your story its amazing
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legolad13 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2017
This is an amazing story. Can't wait for it to continue.
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TTrueKing Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2017
hmmm...you're talent for storytelling...  is... Impressive to say the least. As a writer myself my judgement of your work was somewhat intense, I had to judge you based on my own skills, and I have to say, I am truly impressed, at both your writing and your knowledge of the dragon ball universe... I know that it might not seem like it, but I am judging you by the highest standards I have, and you are still sky rocketing, I am speechless. this is amazingly done. I would love to discuss your story more and even talk shop a little bit if your ever up for it. Think I might learn something from you.
sir/madam, I do not know if this means anything to you at all, but as both a geek and a writer, I tip my hat.
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Sissan08 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG I LOVE YOUR STYLE SO MUCH , it's so like Toriyama's yet it have your cute touchLove  !!!!! and OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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rmunoz39 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2017
Hi Karoine,

What an awesome story, do you plan to keep going on and writing more?
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XmarkZX Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You know i been wondering, how could have been GT with the Super Saiyan God and Super Saiyan Blue Forms.

I know those forms didn´t exist by that thime, but i´ve been asking myself how different could be GT with those forms.

I know Goku wouldn´t be able to do the Transfromation since well he is a Kid but Vegeta pretty sure he can go Blue, heck i think with Blue he could oneshot Baby
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ReggieN07 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2017
My question to you is, can you speak English well?
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