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Meaning Of Life
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Have you ever stared in your own eyes...
and wonder, wonder why?
Have you ever listened to your own words...
and wanting, wanting it to be heard?
Have you ever asked you shadow...
why, why do you go where I go?
Have you every lived and pondered every bit...
to know what, what is the meaning of it?
Have you ever thought, why we all die...
making, making the loved ones cry?
Have you ever questioned why we are what we are...
the meaning, meaning we live for?
Have you ever wonder why we sleep and dream...
but still, still wonder what life means?
Have you ever wondered? I have...
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stinx Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2001
Great job! I agree mrfox this poem really sum ups what everyone of us been wondering. The meaning of life is really sumting :) (Smile)
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reokon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2001
Aww, are you sure you didn't get tucked in? just messin, this is a great poem, and easy to relate to.

-Reo-
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synth Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2001
i agree with the comments above on how we've all at sometime thought of these things. you've done a nice job and your words and style are nice. but it would be nice if it was seperated into verses; makes it look better :) (Smile)

.::SYNTH::.

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gaiden Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2001
i agree partally with with mrfox there, the most of us have wondered about this 'stuff'.. one more thing, i like poems better in verses, looks more 'clean' and if i look away for i sec i wont be totally lost =) (Smile)
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mrfox Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2001
i think this is something we all have wondered and this poem sums it up nicely. nice choice of words, good poem.

[if your work speaks for itself do not interrupt]
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mrfox Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2001
i think this is something we all have wondered and this poem sums it up nicely. nice choice of words, good poem.

[if your work speaks for itself do not interrupt]
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