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I Crave For Storms
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The dark, grayish sky crawls above where I stand.
Not going to thunder nor rain.
Just a brisk wind blowing against my hand.
Slowly driving me insane.

Moist air brushing against my face.
A slight warning for nothing to happen today.
Making me more desperate for the taste.
Which is slightly going away.

Staring straight up high.
Waiting for countless time.
Staring blankly at the sky.
Waiting for the perfect crime.

The gray clouds are moving away, slowly.
I shall be leaving too, but one last call.
Then the lightning strikes in front of me.
I saw it, I saw it all.
A little poem I wrote after seeing a painting... It was an awesome painting.
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dazednconfuzed Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2002
niffty shit
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MEG

~*-Plunge boldly into the thick of life-*~
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vbdude Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2001
Nice. Sort of my style.

vbdude
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darake Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2001
Nice poem, made me think :) (Smile)

.D.

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doomed Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2001
I remember feeling this way about a month ago. I went outside early in the morning. clouds everywhere, lightning off in the distance, not quite thunder yet... I'm at a point in my life where I have to struggle on...... awaiting the storm, the point where i have control.

nice poem, brought me back.
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meglocrush Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2001
really great images. nice work.
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reokon Featured By Owner May 3, 2001
Beautiful.

Reokon

Can you handle Being a Victim?
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stackelberg Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2001   Photographer
KOOL.
Is this what you mean by good stuff?
Like more descriptive?
I understand.
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cooper Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2001
Nice work... just moments of aqwardness (sp?) anyways nice work.

dEaTh SmIlEs At Us AlL...
AlL i CaN dO iS sMiLe BaCk...

@coop@
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